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Description these is for the contest of
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from the comic of [link]



name: Xia, nick name ¨goldfish¨
age: 25

little story:

Stars, bright spots in the dark sky, illuminating the city, natural beauty that makes look beautiful things.
But, I no longer could see them, not because they were not in the sky, I lost my vision, it disappeared, I could not see anything, nor the smile of a child or a mother's tears, nothing.
Everything was gone in my life, it was impossible to live happy.
I lost everything in that accident, my family and my eyes.

One day I was walking carefully through the streets of China, feeling the city under my feet, it was night, I could feel the cold night hugging my body.
All I could remember when I could see were the stars, nothing else, I cant remember anything else, even if someone describe me something or someone they were only stars for me, nothing more than stars.
My parents were a star, my house was a star, my pet was a star I was a star.

But it was a pity, many people mentioned to me that they could no longer see them and not because they were blind, it was because there was too much light in the city doing the work of those little yellow and shinny spots, It was so sad that people could not see what I once saw.

¨can I made stars? ¨
but how? I made that question to myself every time I walked towards my house,
A week after that I doubt my skills with my hands I decided to buy a pair of materials that people told me for make a kite and then I asked for help to some friends of mine, then together we made a kite, they told me that it was beautiful and had made it with the shape of a goldfish, they knew that I loved the goldfish, they looked like stars.

From that day I asked to take me to the darkest place of the city I went many days and I try to learn the smell and the texture of the place to learn well the way to go there alone.

I'm alone now since three weeks, with my kite in my hand and yellow lights bulbs that I got in a store.

I could not see them, but I knew they were there, flying in the sky shining on the black night like stars, I would not want to make the stars feel bad, I just wanted to help them and make people see how beautiful they are.
I was so happy, I was happy because I did not feel alone , because I did not feel vulnerable, because I was not blind anymore, now they are my eyes.

Xia, thats my name and I am knite.
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Comments: 8

ramenCrow [2010-08-25 17:14:14 +0000 UTC]

Pretty, and a good story, but the only thing i find to be wrong with it is that it was twenty years ago that the stars dissapeared, but she remembers the stars and is only 19.

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K-roArt In reply to ramenCrow [2010-08-25 23:50:16 +0000 UTC]

oh! I thanks you so much for the comment!! you are right i will change it!!

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ramenCrow In reply to K-roArt [2010-08-26 00:18:30 +0000 UTC]

no problem. love to help.
i would be entering the contest but my art programs aren't working, and my scanner fades everything to much, so i cant get my art up. D:<
If I can't get it up, i hope you win. ^^

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K-roArt In reply to ramenCrow [2010-08-26 00:24:00 +0000 UTC]

waww thanks you so much! and thanks for helping, is sad that you cant enter to the contests... I hate when the things dont work is horrible...
but keep trying and well thanks!

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ramenCrow In reply to K-roArt [2010-08-26 01:45:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm coloring my picture right now, even if it won't be entered, but I still can't think of a kite to draw. :C

oh well. good luck!

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Turtlesayuri [2010-08-24 01:56:31 +0000 UTC]

<3 Very pretty!

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K-roArt In reply to Turtlesayuri [2010-08-24 23:42:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks you!! I really appreciated it!

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Turtlesayuri In reply to K-roArt [2010-08-25 03:46:51 +0000 UTC]

its not a problem and youre welcome!

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