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Published: 2004-07-26 09:14:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 381; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 11
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Description             Weapon Of Choice

Her Mother always told her,
Don’t regret. Don’t ever look back.

Her Father always said,
Decide on something and stick with it.

So she took some sleeping blue,
Decided on vodka,
And never looked back.
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Comments: 13

devur [2004-09-27 13:01:17 +0000 UTC]

...interesting. Elegant. This certainly wasn't what I was expecting from the title, but I'm pleasantly surprised! Very awesome indeed!

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Kasurin In reply to devur [2004-10-11 15:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks for the fave! I'm having second thoughts about the title, actually. It reminds me too much of a certain song... I'm just curious, but what impression did the title give you before reading the piece?

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Kasurin In reply to Kasurin [2004-10-27 09:43:54 +0000 UTC]

I see, yeah... I'm glad to find out that there was an impression of rebelliousness in the piece. Thanks for indulging my inquiry!

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devur In reply to Kasurin [2004-10-13 15:15:15 +0000 UTC]

(sorry for the delay, I haven't been on)

The impression I got from the title was sort of rebellious. Then again, my brain naturally skews things that way, but I still got a feeling of "this is what I use to piss people off." Funny, because now that I think about it, the term (shoud?) generally sound like "this is what I kill people with" but it still doesn't to me. But yeah, that's about it.

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tneconni [2004-07-27 14:28:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh my. I really like this piece. Definatly sends a message straight to the reader. Very straight forward, but not lacking anything.

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Kasurin In reply to tneconni [2004-07-31 12:47:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!

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indiochink [2004-07-26 20:56:39 +0000 UTC]

now that's taking good advice in a different direction. It's straight to the point. I like it

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Kasurin In reply to indiochink [2004-07-27 12:35:27 +0000 UTC]

ChinkyIndio? Reviewing my poems? Ohhh thank you for doing so! Very nice of you !

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indiochink In reply to Kasurin [2004-07-27 22:27:16 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I know I don't usually read poems. But hey, I do try ^_^

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Kasurin In reply to indiochink [2004-07-31 13:18:15 +0000 UTC]

I know, and I'm touched that you actually read mine to try Thanks...

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acidshadow [2004-07-26 09:49:31 +0000 UTC]

simple and short, yet speaks thousands of words...

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Marissa-Weir [2004-07-26 09:22:49 +0000 UTC]

Wow....this is a pretty interesting piece. I'm not totally sure how it makes me feel, I believe this expresses confusion/mixed feelings. Very different. Good work.

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Kasurin In reply to Marissa-Weir [2004-07-27 11:51:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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