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lithiumlilac [2017-02-14 15:39:33 +0000 UTC]
they look too obviously like steven universe characters, i would try and make them a little more original. the first one is literally pilot pearl in a different outfit without the gem, the second one is a female steven, the third one is the only slightly original one, and the last one is just a recolored amethyst.
plus all the heights are the same for their corresponding "inspirations".
the concept it also just a steven universe rip-off.
my advice is to draw inspiration from SEVERAL things you love instead of just one, that way its less painfully obvious what you copied.
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Kattinx In reply to lithiumlilac [2017-02-14 23:40:06 +0000 UTC]
WELL FUNNY THING YOU WOULD SAY THAT because I've been working on newer designs:
who said this was the finished results? I was gonna experiment with more styles //something I should have mentioned in my post, whoops my bad
But these are FAAAR from the finished results I'm gonna stick with
A bit of an advice, maybe idk tell some good parts in giving constructive criticism than just hitting me with all bad things at once, because from my feelings from this, it felt like you treated me like I was an idiot. I understand that this may have come for good intentions. I'm just not been having the best day today so I'm sorry if this came out as sorta rude,,,
although that last statement kinda hurt my feelings
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Mellowsrule In reply to Kattinx [2017-04-23 05:11:59 +0000 UTC]
I'm kinda with Sakurablitz here, I mean maybe the delivery was a bit rude, but the criticism is completely valid. I've struggled with creating my own identity when writing characters and its tough, but when most people look at something, they think about it's flaws before its good qualities. I like the designs, especially the one on the far right, but when you look at all of them together and look at the story, the resemblance to Steven universe is way too blatant. I'm definitely gonna keep an eye out for this project in the future, though.
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Super-Duper-Gal [2017-02-11 17:34:44 +0000 UTC]
Im so hyped! So, what kind of spells do they use when they're not fighting monsters?~
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Kattinx In reply to Super-Duper-Gal [2017-02-11 20:55:53 +0000 UTC]
hoho they kinda use all kinds of spells to make their everyday living a lot easier. Basic things like making the dishes clean itself, making inanimate objects move to to help doing basic shores, mostly affective when the gang are busy with education.
A lot of these spells can sometimes get out of hand and may tend to sabotage instead of helping, so one gotta check them out from times to times to see if everything is still in order :'D
The witches have special themed powers toward what their hobbies and interests are.
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Kattinx In reply to Super-Duper-Gal [2017-02-11 22:05:36 +0000 UTC]
The with pastel-like clothes named Doris has an interest for water and flora
The one next to her named Barb has interests in photography and there would be very interesting abilities~
The tall one has interest in time and space
the last one has interest in fire
these are just one-dimensional characteristics, if I told more there would be spoliers, plus I don't know half of the abilities names (not a english native speaker)
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Super-Duper-Gal In reply to Kattinx [2017-02-11 22:06:57 +0000 UTC]
Do you they use their spells on humans?
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Kattinx In reply to Super-Duper-Gal [2017-02-11 22:15:06 +0000 UTC]
not necessary but it could happen, intentional or not
they try not to though.
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Super-Duper-Gal In reply to Kattinx [2017-02-11 22:17:48 +0000 UTC]
If they had to, what kind of spell would they use?
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Kattinx In reply to Super-Duper-Gal [2017-02-11 22:19:52 +0000 UTC]
probably...
healing
memory erase
time freezing
shield aura
//one is a real prankster so she would probably tease some with teleportation and fire (nothing too bad though)
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Super-Duper-Gal In reply to Kattinx [2017-02-11 22:22:29 +0000 UTC]
Do they have a theme song? If they don't, could I write the lyrics?//no musical notes with it though
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Kattinx In reply to Super-Duper-Gal [2017-02-11 22:26:57 +0000 UTC]
I haven't gotten so much into their themes yet :0
it'll be really hard for me to describe their sylized theme but... since it's only lyrics, I guess... why not? it was a really nice thing of you to suggest~
//Is there a catch though? I need to know if there is one
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Super-Duper-Gal In reply to Kattinx [2017-02-11 22:29:04 +0000 UTC]
Well, you don't have to accept it, it's, in a way, a suggestion.
So, is that a yes?
//nope! No money, nothing! You don't even have to credit me at all! I just like to help!
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Kattinx In reply to Super-Duper-Gal [2017-02-11 22:31:50 +0000 UTC]
yeah I believe so! c:
//aah that's so sweet of you! ;u;
(keep in mind that this is still in the early stages of development and that the story and character's arc and traits may be altered a bit)
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Super-Duper-Gal In reply to Kattinx [2017-02-11 22:37:42 +0000 UTC]
Do you want it to be a certain genre? And the title in the song?
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Kattinx In reply to Super-Duper-Gal [2017-02-11 23:00:25 +0000 UTC]
hmm... that's a really hard one. I feel I don't want to be worrying too much about the genre, more like it's unfluenced by a lot of different genres.
//the title song is hard too rn imo. the subject would probably need to be decided before the naming...
to make it a bit easier with the genres, would you like to listen to a couple of songs/themes/soundtracks that I've gotten inspired by for this story's music in general?
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Kattinx In reply to Super-Duper-Gal [2017-02-12 20:54:19 +0000 UTC]
Np! I hope it's good enough, if not, feel free to ask more questions and I'll try my best to answer them :0
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Super-Duper-Gal In reply to Kattinx [2017-02-12 20:59:39 +0000 UTC]
So is there a certain length you want the song to be?^^
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Kattinx In reply to Super-Duper-Gal [2017-02-12 21:02:43 +0000 UTC]
hmm... maybe around 2-3 minutes or less? somewhere in that line perhaps
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Super-Duper-Gal In reply to Kattinx [2017-02-12 22:05:05 +0000 UTC]
Cool, cool, so, do you only have those 4 characters and monsters at the moment? Mind if I add some characters?^^
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Sharia-Backup [2016-12-31 22:15:08 +0000 UTC]
Ooooooohohoho I'm hyped! All these girls look amazing and them colors! So warm~
Really excited to see more of these girls :3
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Kattinx In reply to Sharia-Backup [2017-01-02 12:50:29 +0000 UTC]
aaaahhh awesome! ;7; hopefully I can draw some more concepts soon
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SunAndInfy [2016-12-31 08:04:38 +0000 UTC]
OH SHIT!!! >:0
Love the designs!! They look amazing! This will defiantly be interesting I think. UvU
-Infy
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Kattinx In reply to SunAndInfy [2016-12-31 13:01:41 +0000 UTC]
aaahh thank you!! ;7;
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SunAndInfy In reply to Kattinx [2016-12-31 14:07:00 +0000 UTC]
>v> you're welcome, my dude!
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ElectricBlueTempest [2016-12-31 02:59:05 +0000 UTC]
I def see the inspo from SU. I'm looking forward to seeing what you're going to do with this! (Heck, what even are there names you didn't write them in the description!)
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Kattinx In reply to ElectricBlueTempest [2016-12-31 13:00:40 +0000 UTC]
Hopefully it won't be TOO much like SU, the style and the aesthetic is very close to eachother :'D //But I'll have different shading alonf with some other differences. Definitely a not so close plot, trust me.
for the meantime I'll just post concept art
Alrighty, from left to right: Doris, Barb, Mancha and Sundaey (not her real name but it's like her alias. I couldn't decide if I wanted to be "sundae" or "sunday" so it became both :'D)
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YAG0K0R0 [2016-12-30 20:19:08 +0000 UTC]
the second one kind of reminds me of Nan from AHS
this looks really cool btw!
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Kattinx In reply to YAG0K0R0 [2016-12-31 13:13:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh? Oh yeah I can understand why xD
Thank you! ;7;
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Moonlit-Creator [2016-12-30 18:59:40 +0000 UTC]
These characters do look fantastic. My only problem is the possible plot, because it sounds very similar to the situation with the Crystal Gems. Maybe to mix things up, suppose that magic isn't widely accepted. Then the GlamCove witches would have to find ways to keep their powers hidden.
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Moonlit-Creator In reply to Kattinx [2016-12-30 19:53:17 +0000 UTC]
Okay. I was just worried that it would be too much like Steven Universe.
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LittleMissHistoryLov [2016-12-30 16:21:24 +0000 UTC]
Ooooooo they all look so fantastic!! I love their designs :3c
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LittleMissHistoryLov In reply to Kattinx [2016-12-30 16:28:01 +0000 UTC]
The one with the pretty yellow-ish hair and the other with the flowy skirt are the two fave designs in my eyes :3c
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LittleMissHistoryLov In reply to Kattinx [2016-12-30 16:29:48 +0000 UTC]
:3c
Also, it's good to see you back before the new year!
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