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Published: 2007-07-31 15:25:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 175; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 4
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Description I've woken again in an ocean of salt,
Drenched from recurring
Dreams of such horror.
They haunt my evenings.


Nightmares of a future so absurd
This fantasy of events could never occur.
Such vivid imagery has me
Blurring all kinds of lines
Between here and reality.
Billboards have replaced all window panes.
Faith is less a feeling and more a mandate.
Fed up are the sun and the moon.
They're burning up and leaving soon.


My twisted imagination.
It has a mind of its own.
So wake me for this dream.
My crooked precognition.
Its distance from the truth grows.
Please wake me from this dream.


Where there's an answer for everything
Hiding behind child-proof plastic locks
And under cotton swabs.
There's a medicine for every ill.
If the money's right the pain can be
Drowned with a bitter pill.
All the women are paper thin.
Their necks barely hold up their heads.
Boys have been trained
And prepared since birth
To serve their role
And fight until their death.


My twisted imagination.
It has a mind of its own.
So wake me for this dream.
My crooked precognition.
Its distance from the truth grows.
Please wake me from this dream.


It's only a fabrication.
This place is all in my head.
It's only a fabrication.
This place is all in my head.


I rub my eyes to find
This whole time I thought
I was in a slumber,
They've been open wide.

{[Parable of the Sower]}
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Comments: 6

chocolatemalteser [2007-08-01 18:58:20 +0000 UTC]

lol well because u wrote critique not desired guess what....i'm gonna critique in my own special way ...

that's a bear??? o i thought....it was....something else...like a dead chicken...

that dude should be like an evil punk rocker lol

don't ever forget the fact that i am your friend so don't take offence meh likes

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Kikuli In reply to chocolatemalteser [2007-08-01 21:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Jesus. D8

I said no critique 'cause I know it's wierd.

PUNK ROCKER YESSSSSSSS. >D

HISHAIRANDDEADCHICKENOWNYOUALL.

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Keltena [2007-08-01 14:33:29 +0000 UTC]

First of all, endless sketchy square spiral tunnel = very surreal and spooky. The creature huddled in the corner is definitely the best part, though; it looks really scared, and the the sort of frail way it's drawn helps.

Nice touch with the broken teddy bear. xD

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Kikuli In reply to Keltena [2007-08-01 16:55:10 +0000 UTC]

Thankyouuu. <3

The teddy bear was a moment of sudden inspiration. D8 I was all "I CAN DRAW A BEARZ."

And then it sort appeared. xDDD

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JokERthe [2007-07-31 16:30:44 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I love the atmosphere!

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Kikuli In reply to JokERthe [2007-07-31 22:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Sankoo, Cattt! <3

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