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Kisagami-sama — ZxC Would you be proud of me?
Published: 2011-10-04 22:47:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 830; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 2
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Description "What was momma like?"


Zack leaned against the window of the train, his cheek pressed to the window pane in thought to answer his daughter's question. He shuffeled uncomfortabley at the memory of his best friend and 'mother' of the little girl sitting beside him, thinking of a way to put his answer. At a glance, the little girl beside him held his hand and looked up curiously, her short blonde hair hung to her shoulders and her green eyes staring up at Zack in the same fashion. She was his daughter, and his greatest possession. Pretty much the only thing his best friend had left behind for him that wouldn't fade away.

"Your mom... was... " he began, struggeling to ever start his explamation to his daughter. She blinked at him and tilted her head questioningly, just like her momma had. Zack breathed out a small laugh and closed his beautiful green eyes, the air from his breath pushing a little strand of black hair away form his mouth.

"Your mom was amazing... he was really kind... to everyone. Even those he didn't like... he was a wonderfull friend... always cared even if it was for the smallest thing. He refused to go anywhere when I was sick or having a bad day... he fixed up a horrible mission with a little punch in the arm and a hug too." he mummbeled, pausing every few words to catch a breath for a continuation.

"He was... he was...."

***

"Marry you?"

Zack nodded, a bright flushed tint on his cheeks and the rest of his skin too, nervous as any man could possibly be. The night sky sent a little wind their way and the stars shone down on them as the ocean lapped at the shore where Zack was standing. Cloud Strife turned around at him and blinked again, realizing what he had just been asked.

"Will you?" Zack pressed on in hope.

"... Yes." Cloud answered, putting his hands behind his back and smiling, "But.. promise me something first Zack."

Zack smiled and nodded, "Yes, anything. I'll promise you anything." he continued in a grin. The blonde took a step to him and gave him a tap on the nose. "Never leave me... okay?" he asked, his bright blue eyes staring Zack through with that amazingly bright shine. The raven man took up Cloud's hand and nodded, "Never."

***

Before Zack could realize it, he was letting salty tears slip from his bright green eyes, cheek still pressed to the window. A tug on his sleeve caused him to glance over at his daughter curiously as her hand wrapped around his finger. "Daddy?" she sniffed, copying him by beginning to cry too. Zack couldn't help but smile and laugh a little bit at his little girl's silly attempt.

"Why are you crying too?" he asked, using his thumb to run it across his girl's eyes softly, ridding them of salty solutions. The little 5-year-old looked up at Zack curiously as the raven used his shoulder to wipe his tears away. He smiled down at her and ran a hand into her hair, rubbing her little head with his strong hands that held incredible warmth.

Cloud... I think I've found my reason to live... Zack thought, Something you trusted me with... I couldn't quite keep my promise by letting you die but... Sarah... I want to keep her safe from the dangers of such a cruel and harsh world as I did you. You once said I was your wolf right? This wolf has something to protect now... I want to protect Sarah.

Sarah smiled at him happily as their train stopped and everyone started to disembark onto the cement of the station. Zack stood up to get Sarah her little backpack and get his fat suitcase. Zack pulled the cases down with little effort, soon getting off the train with Sarah holding his hand. He looked down at his daughter, smiling at her bright face.



Would you be proud of me, Cloud?
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Comments: 49

roni92man [2013-02-01 10:19:25 +0000 UTC]

what happen to cloud?

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pococ [2011-10-28 18:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Tuching, vivid as ever. Pore Zack.

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FinisDux [2011-10-28 07:16:29 +0000 UTC]

lol xD in chapter 2 of a touch of a feather we called the oc sarah too xD (we're done soon (with ch2))

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adarkworldfantasy [2011-10-10 07:29:24 +0000 UTC]

aww, this is so sweet and sad at the same time. Very good story dear!

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Kisagami-sama In reply to adarkworldfantasy [2011-10-10 11:00:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much! <3

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Manah-Angel-Eyes [2011-10-08 02:15:26 +0000 UTC]

Aww what a sweet story ^^

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Kisagami-sama In reply to Manah-Angel-Eyes [2011-10-08 14:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Manah-Angel-Eyes In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-08 14:25:54 +0000 UTC]

Anytime X3

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KaligulaPRO [2011-10-06 04:09:04 +0000 UTC]

I just KNEW it was from Clannad!!! I didn't read your comment before reading your fic...

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Kisagami-sama In reply to KaligulaPRO [2011-10-06 10:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Aw~

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ZackyxCloudy [2011-10-05 22:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Awww So sad, but its sweet too I love it, does a sequeal seem to be a possiblity? .w.

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Kisagami-sama In reply to ZackyxCloudy [2011-10-06 00:11:30 +0000 UTC]

Maybe so..

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ZackyxCloudy In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-06 10:20:08 +0000 UTC]

oUo then maybe yay

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Kisagami-sama In reply to ZackyxCloudy [2011-10-06 10:28:02 +0000 UTC]

XD

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ZackyxCloudy In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-06 21:56:39 +0000 UTC]

xD

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Evermore17 [2011-10-05 20:40:46 +0000 UTC]

<3333 I imagined something like this but the other way around, zack was gone and cloud had a little girl and they were sitting in their living room, and she was laying her head on his lap... This is so pretty...

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Kisagami-sama In reply to Evermore17 [2011-10-06 00:11:47 +0000 UTC]

Awww~

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StillDollDemon [2011-10-05 19:32:20 +0000 UTC]

lovely!i want a sequel,i think it's too sad that Cloud dies/left...make him come back ;D

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Kisagami-sama In reply to StillDollDemon [2011-10-05 19:42:18 +0000 UTC]

XD How is the question.

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StillDollDemon In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-07 17:08:03 +0000 UTC]

what question?please make a sequel in which Cloud isn't dead and meets his kid?please?

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Kisagami-sama In reply to StillDollDemon [2011-10-07 21:02:08 +0000 UTC]

I can try.

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StillDollDemon In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-07 22:11:56 +0000 UTC]

lol XD that would be lovely

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Kisagami-sama In reply to StillDollDemon [2011-10-07 22:14:46 +0000 UTC]

Yup, I agree~

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StillDollDemon In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-08 12:14:42 +0000 UTC]

mpreg ftw

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Kisagami-sama In reply to StillDollDemon [2011-10-08 14:16:24 +0000 UTC]

XD Yup

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StillDollDemon In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-08 14:50:27 +0000 UTC]

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Denialordream [2011-10-05 09:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Omg! This is so sweet! May have a few tears too.....

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Kisagami-sama In reply to Denialordream [2011-10-05 10:22:15 +0000 UTC]

Thankies!

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Denialordream In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-06 21:09:28 +0000 UTC]

No worries ^.^

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Miriabella [2011-10-05 09:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I am struggling to keep my tears away <3

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Kisagami-sama In reply to Miriabella [2011-10-05 10:22:04 +0000 UTC]

AWW!! [hands napkin XD]

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Lavi97 [2011-10-05 01:44:01 +0000 UTC]

*A* So touching!

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Kisagami-sama In reply to Lavi97 [2011-10-05 10:21:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~ <3

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Lavi97 In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-05 11:10:07 +0000 UTC]

do write moar xD

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Kisagami-sama In reply to Lavi97 [2011-10-05 19:41:52 +0000 UTC]

XD I can only try.

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rythmol [2011-10-05 00:18:44 +0000 UTC]

    maybe i should start spelling my name without the h~*~

    but damn, amanda.
    you've improved a lot.
    now excuse me while i go rape your gallery.

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Kisagami-sama In reply to rythmol [2011-10-05 00:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks?? 0_o

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rythmol In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-05 00:37:31 +0000 UTC]

    just let me harass you online. I:

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Kisagami-sama In reply to rythmol [2011-10-05 00:40:57 +0000 UTC]

Okay <3

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rythmol In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-05 01:05:52 +0000 UTC]

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Kisagami-sama In reply to rythmol [2011-10-05 01:16:22 +0000 UTC]

What is it..?

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rythmol In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-05 10:25:00 +0000 UTC]

    a japanese music video.
    just watch it.

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Kisagami-sama In reply to rythmol [2011-10-05 10:28:23 +0000 UTC]

Fine

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Gamer-Master2012 [2011-10-05 00:01:08 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! deserves a nomination

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Kisagami-sama In reply to Gamer-Master2012 [2011-10-05 00:02:10 +0000 UTC]

Nomination? What for? XD

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Gamer-Master2012 In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-05 00:10:41 +0000 UTC]

For your great story DUH!

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Kisagami-sama In reply to Gamer-Master2012 [2011-10-05 00:13:34 +0000 UTC]

Nominated for...?

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Gamer-Master2012 In reply to Kisagami-sama [2011-10-05 00:18:20 +0000 UTC]

For your great story DUH!

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Kisagami-sama In reply to Gamer-Master2012 [2011-10-05 00:30:50 +0000 UTC]

XD OKAY OKAY

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