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Published: 2015-10-28 21:04:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 710; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Description Day something or other for Pokehalloween! 

I timed myself on this one; took 3 hours and 20 minutes. I feel kind of sad about that looking at how plain it is... But oh well, I'll gather some starting points to improve on! 

The lighting in this one threw me for a loop, where is it coming from? One of these days I'll figure it out.
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Comments: 6

Marieon [2015-12-21 03:11:03 +0000 UTC]

Hello I'm from#Projectcomment
First off I love Pokemon and the trio looks pretty! Ah while it looks plain, I think you've captured that "galaxy" look right! And although some drawings are very plain, they can be very eye-catching as well, so don't worry bout that! Hm as for lighting I'm not too sure where it comes from ( because I don't study planets haha xD) but like HoshinoDestiny said, the glow lines seem a bit thick even though they are using their powers. Ah I found something similar that could help(Its not the trio, but a Celebi reference should be okay)click here! Yes its from the Celebi movie xD
Oh! How about making the space background larger and adding a curtain of stars/planets in the background?(I know you added some, but they couldn't really be seen at the top)

Also, Uxie looks really chill there at the back hehe :3

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KokoKiero In reply to Marieon [2015-12-21 04:10:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the critique!

Ahh! I love that still of Celebi actually, I totally should have done something like that! Thank you for that suggestion, I love that idea a lot! 

I'll keep the space aspects in mind too, more stars. And I figured Uxie was just done with the other two's antics, he's ready to get the show on the road. XD

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Marieon In reply to KokoKiero [2015-12-22 03:44:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!
Well your version is nice too, just the glow seems a bit thick, thats all!
Haha still good job

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HoshiNoDestiny [2015-12-20 19:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Hello, I'm here for Project-Comment ! This picture is very cool, I love the concept and idea behind it, I'm such a sucker for pictures of space! 
The coloring is very cool, strong shadows suits this view the best! 
I think making the glow more blurred would have given a nicer effect, this way it looks too much like an outline! Also, I think you could use references to make the land of the planet more realistic: you can do a more jagged margin and use more shades of green and brown... and maybe some gray and white too, for the highest mountains!

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KokoKiero In reply to HoshiNoDestiny [2015-12-20 22:15:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the critique! 

I kind of wanted their glow to be used as an outline, to indicate that they fly with their psychic powers (like how things being moved telekinetically in a show can be outlined in white or something)... I could blur it more in the background though.

The earth gave me a lot of trouble and I was pretty frustrated with it partway through and gave up. XD Obviously that shows, so thanks for the tips there! If I do another space/earth scene I will keep those in mind.

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HoshiNoDestiny In reply to KokoKiero [2015-12-27 14:15:03 +0000 UTC]

It's a pleasure ;D I hope it was useful!
Don't worry, I understood that was your intent, but I think making it so solid makes the scene looks to unnatural, you can keep the glow big to separate them from the background, but still make it more blurred to the edges!

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