OnyxTheDemon [2011-12-30 17:18:19 +0000 UTC]
That was beautifully written! Very good descriptions. I loved it. But, I am knida confused (its probably only a type-o) on this line: " It hearts my heart...". but besides that, job well done! What a sad story. It makes me frustrated and want to scream at someone.
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KuruNa In reply to OnyxTheDemon [2011-12-30 18:53:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for pointing out the type-o.
Got that fixed.
And thank you. This was all written just a couple nights ago out of anger.
I guess emotions make the better stories.
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OnyxTheDemon In reply to KuruNa [2012-01-03 05:38:39 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, glad to help.
I know what you mean. My most favorite story that I have ever written was with my emotions making my hand move across the page. Things just come to you.
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