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Published: 2005-11-05 10:43:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 2437; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 176
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girl with crow
fullview please
please give me some critical comments on how to improve this,
thanks alot my friends
Edit:
Made the skin tone a little warmer so that she wouldn't appear so yellowy, thanks to daviella for pointing it out
-11/Jan/2006
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Comments: 37
heyy i know this chick from my gothic and lolita beauty bible. i tried to draw her too ^^ but this btw is amazing.
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hehe busted!
yeah the model is really lovely
be sure to show me if you managed to draw her too~
thanks for the favorite and comment~~!!
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hehe thanks you again!! you're welcome to come visit by any time~
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ah.. beautiful.. i like her eyes and lips... ah.. i think the skin is still a bt greenish/ yellowish... ah... but it's a beautiful piece!
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thanks alot for your comment
yeah I think I'll stay with this decision for now
hope to see you around again soon~
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This is really beautiful. I must have taken forever to make it look so realistic.
She reminds me of one of the models from the G&L Bibles...
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thanks for commenting~
Yes I have actually used G&L Bible model as reference...
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i really like her eyes.. you did a great job there
the only thing thats weird is her hand (i think its too big for the rest of her body).. hope you dont mind me telling this
her nails look a lil odd too
but then again.. i wont be able to do such an awsome work in this like nor in the next one so 
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ups theres a typo there 
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thanks for the suggestions Meyra
and no worries for the typo, I barely notice it XD
thanks again for your encouragements
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this looks very nice
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You're right, the whold thing is too yellowy.
thanks for pointing that out
and nice to meet you
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nice to meet you too and you are welcome
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This is truely amazing. The background is just awesome! I guess my only crit would be the ear looks a little long. But that was with me really looking hard to find something wrong with it. You've done a fantastic job indeed. You need a print account!
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thanks
yeah she does have a long earlope
lol I think I'll need to get alot more pageviews before having a print account really
thanks alot for your critics and support always old friend
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Oh wow, this has got to be one of your best pictures. The scribbly texture is great, and I really like the way you do skin like it's glooowing. I think her hand is a little out of proportion as someone said... hmm. Maybe you should write "preview" somewhere on the preview so people looking through your gallery later won't think that's all there is. But... very nice
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thanks alot
I've put the "preview" word on the thumbnail now
thanks for the encouragement and suggestion
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WOW! I've watched you grow so much as an artist as far as colouring and shading in concern over the past few months...what a large move forward! Excellent work!
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thanks alot
well I really have to thank you all for giving me so many helpful comments,
I couldnt have improved as much if not for you guys
thanks again for helping my friend, really appreciate it
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Your quite welcome...Well the way I see it is...you find some people can accept helpful advice gracefully...thereby improving...and others...well lets just say...they don't want none...period!....LOL
The other side of the coin is there are some people that always want to correct others like they are the "guru of du du" and cannot for the life of them... just say something totally nice, but I'm grateful that most people at DA folks are great on both accounts...there is just a few hanging around, but I just tune them out....whisper to myself..."Whatever!" and move on to other fun stuff...LOLOL
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lol yeah you got the point
I'm glad all the people I've met so far are all the great and helpful bunch
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Stunning work! I kind of like the elongated neck. I agree, the nails are a little out-of-place.
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thanks alot
I wanted to give her that goth fashion with the nail,
but I guess she doesnt look that much like a goth afterall
thanks alot for the comment
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Very nice, anatomy is a lil weird looking, but great job overall.
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thanks
yeah I'll have to be careful about proportion next time
thanks for pointing it out!
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no problem, still very good work, possibly your best. congrats on a job well done.
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This is a very nice effort overall. The face is particularly nice, soft but detailed and expressive. If I had to nitpick, my suggestions would be to make the neck a little thicker and shorter, the hand a little smaller and do less of the dark shading on the skin next to the fabric.The shading on the dress is nice and soft and the lace is a nice touch.
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I think your right, the hand is too big in proportion to her face,
also the neck is too long, more like anime proportion (wasn't in purpose)
I'll try to be more conscious about proportion next time
thanks alot for the suggestions and compliments
and thanks for the fav+!
also nice to meet you new friend
appreciate it alot
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thanks alot for your encouragement and fav
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What a cute little girl! As usual, her face is very realistically draw. A very sweet face too, I might add.
The shape of her neck and her shoulders remind me very much of Audrey Hepburn. With the square neckline of the dress, it can almost pass for Natasha in "War and Peace".
The crow is very sweet as well.
The only thing I feel is a bit odd is the long and dark fingernails.... Maybe it's just me, but somehow I don't think those nails go that well with wuch a sweet girl. (My very persional opinion is that long black fingernails belongs to witches)
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thanks alot
well I was going to make her gothic&lolita,
but maybe she turn out to be more "lolita" then "goth" ^^"
thanks again for the comment and encouragement
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