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Rease-Hunter [2011-07-05 17:53:49 +0000 UTC]

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Critique time e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Razz)"/>. And who better to do that than me huh?

Now, I like what you did with the coloring. I've been noticing your progress in that you've been blending, shading, and mixing and using complimentary colors and moving away from a lot of that colorful stuff to make it easier on the viewer. I like that a lot since it makes it easier on my eyes

That and she does look shy, so don't worry bout that e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Now, as far as what you need to improve on, anatomy still isn't your best. Your getting there, but I still think you got a ways to go. For starters, proportionally her torso is a lot longer than her legs, when it should be about half and half. That and her ear is far too forward on her skull, looking like it comes out from next to her eye e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Sad)"/>.

But don't worry e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>. It's all about keeping those things in mind when your doing your next project. I still think you'd benefit greatly from doing some gesture drawings.

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SED-moh [2011-07-03 14:43:13 +0000 UTC]

Aw, she looks lovely! I really enjoy the scenery you've put her in, it just fits her and her expression is really cute too~

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KarriBabe [2011-06-21 19:06:32 +0000 UTC]

aaaaw, how cute (and how fast!) The colors are lovely <3 And I love that she is bringing life into a flower, that's so cute!!!!
And that wood/field/nature-thingy seams like a wonderful place, with two "watercanals" and lots of flowers
Thanks so much hun, it's really-really sweet And I can see you've improved at your watercolors

(I saw that you wanted critique)
Well, theres only two things I would point my finger on if I should be picky;
1: her ear is placed a bit too far in on her face, that would be easy to fix: just lat it be a litte bit more har between the ear and the face <3
2: her feet, but feets are some of the hardest things to draw

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lottichan [2011-06-21 15:01:03 +0000 UTC]

i love the background, and her pose is soo cute!!

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Tajii-chan [2011-06-21 09:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Nell looks gorgeous in your style; I instantly recognized her!

I loved the colors here- they're wonderful!

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poisonedc00kie [2011-06-21 07:29:16 +0000 UTC]

awesome ^^

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GizmoTheGreen [2011-06-20 21:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Not leaving that forrest for eternity :I

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Vixenu [2011-06-20 20:19:15 +0000 UTC]

She's so pretty Tori :'D <3 I love how you've coloured it, and her hair is beautiful! <3 Nice one ^^

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