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AmmoBot-HB [2015-04-06 22:30:22 +0000 UTC]
I can see what you were aiming for but the issues with this duck are its forms. It's coming off as flat all around mostly due to the complete profile view its at. But also because the way the shapes of the various panels and natural areas wrap around cause it to look flat since they aren't properly created. When drawing out the initial sketch you should draw through the piece so you can understand fully where the objects wrap around and where they end instead of just guessing. A good example of this is the coils around his neck. They wrap around in incorrect ways and it shows that you more or less guessed instead of being more accurate with it and drawing through to see where they should be. The beak, the wings, the gears on his legs as well as his legs all have a flat look to them because the panels don't wrap around correctly to the shape of the duck but instead it was drawn more as what you thought it should look like. The rendering ontop of these areas helps to solidify them into a flat nature as well as the lighting doesn't quite accentuate form but accentuates the flat nature of the rest of the image.
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Luckyducky12 [2014-11-09 02:31:37 +0000 UTC]
A DUCK!
Buh...but i love DUCKS!
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theairevolution [2014-11-06 18:39:08 +0000 UTC]
ER MAH GERSH STEAMPUNK DUCK
SO WOW
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Lamentine [2014-11-06 18:09:24 +0000 UTC]
You missed the show.
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CreepyJC [2014-11-06 17:38:53 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha xDD
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Lamentine In reply to CreepyJC [2014-11-06 17:46:04 +0000 UTC]
Are you laughing at the poem or the fact that I'm messing with Kastoway with a 3 hour drawing? xD
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CreepyJC In reply to Lamentine [2014-11-06 17:47:38 +0000 UTC]
Mostly the poem. X'D
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Lamentine In reply to CreepyJC [2014-11-06 17:53:23 +0000 UTC]
We should make a chain song. I'll start:
HEY SLENDER
TOUCH MY BUM
COME ON NOW
HAVE A LITTLE FUN
HE SAYS
SURE MAN
AFTER I'M DONE WITH WORK
SO WHAT'S THE PLAN?
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CreepyJC In reply to Lamentine [2014-11-06 18:34:02 +0000 UTC]
PARTYING WITH FLAN
THE MAIN MAN
//cantthinkofanythingelse
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Lamentine In reply to CreepyJC [2014-11-06 18:35:47 +0000 UTC]
WHO'S THIS FLAN
NOT MY MAN
IT'S NO OTHER THAN OFFENDERMAN
UH OH
DON'T TAKE THE ROSE
BETTER WATCH OUT
FOR THAT RUBBER HOSE
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CreepyJC In reply to Lamentine [2014-11-06 18:55:56 +0000 UTC]
UH-OH
DON'T PLAY WITH HIS PLAY-DOH
THAT ROSE IS THORNY
WATCH OUT, OFFENDY'S GETTING HORNY
GET UP AND HEAD FOR THE DOOR
OFFENDY'S COMING BACK FOR MORE
//SHOT
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Lamentine In reply to CreepyJC [2014-11-06 18:59:48 +0000 UTC]
OH WAIT MA'AM
YOU MUST STOP
I JUST WANT SOME BUM
I'M NOT DUMB
COME ON NOW
HAVE A LITTLE TALK
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CreepyJC In reply to Lamentine [2014-11-06 19:04:59 +0000 UTC]
RUNNING FOR THE KNOB
GETTING AWAY FROM THIS WHACKJOB
NOT WILLING TO ACT ALL SNOOTY
JC AIN'T GIVING UP HER BOOTY
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Lamentine In reply to CreepyJC [2014-11-06 19:07:19 +0000 UTC]
SWIGGITY SWOOTY I'M COMING FOR DAT BOOTY
HANG IN THERE GIRL
I WANT SMUCK THAT TOOTY
THERE'S NO ESCAPE
LET ME SEE THAT BIG FAT PEARL
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CreepyJC In reply to Lamentine [2014-11-06 19:10:03 +0000 UTC]
THIS HAS ESCALATED QUICKLY
JC RUNS FAR AWAY
WILL PROBABLY BE BACK ANOTHER DAY
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Lamentine In reply to CreepyJC [2014-11-06 19:13:14 +0000 UTC]
All...right...that was hilarious. I think we took it too far xD
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