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YoungWolfen [2017-02-05 02:40:19 +0000 UTC]
oh wow i wish i could draw like this XD i just have to say one thing though: i was on youtube looking up how to draw the female body, and was really amazed when i saw the wow they drew breasts, and the common mistakes many artist make when drawing them...and im really sorry to suggest that you may have made a mistake on the breasts. i cant really remember how they said to draw them, but theres the tutorial i watched, and it helped me a lot, and ill link it here...but please understand im not purposely trying to come off as rude at all im just saying that the breasts were probably drawn wrong if you were going for realistic... im sorry!
here's the video that explains the mistakes: www.youtube.com/watch?v=_6wdDNβ¦
and heres the tutorial: www.youtube.com/watch?v=zTGhRYβ¦
im just trying to help out as much as i can with people who make small mistakes like this, and if you've already corrected it sorry! again im really sorry for sounding rude about it, i just dont really know how to say it otherwise...
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Eischampion [2015-05-24 00:08:53 +0000 UTC]
nice artwork like always, a few points i want to notice:
first thing the lighteffekts:
The lightsourse looks for me a bit of random.
her left nipple is completly white (censoring probably), but still: the ribs below are highlited from above --> the lightsourse have to be above her
the hip has it lightreflections more coming from her back --> the lightsourse is behind her
at the nek the strongest point is it from (her point of view) right / rightbehind side
her left leg is tilted backwards, but still gets reflections on it whitch would meen the lightsorse is infront of her but below hip-level
The Body:
Overall seen it could be a real body. It looks pretty accurate andΒ the proportions are pretty well done.
to draw her cest (the ribs) that massivly she looks extremly thin --> to look like that is normal for models but most at most of the women (who are not strangly tall but don't weight anything) those ribs arn't that good to be seen. This is not a direkt crtic to the art more a question: was it your intention you want to draw a pretty skinny body?
If no: probably search some other pictures, the good thing with the internet is that you've got thousends of picktures of human bodys uncovered
If yes: nice work, everything fits perfect and there are only "i prefer this or that" / "it depends on the person drawn" things
Β Examples are the pretty big looking gap between the two brests (the gap grows the further youre looking down) or out of my point of view her but/hip is a bit to small. a female body are most of the times at least a bit of a "bump?" (i don't know the word, i mean: like a hill, it gets bigger)
But without knowing whose body you've drawn it stays a pretty realistic and good bodyshape
PS. sportive bodys with a lot of muscles don't show the ribs also
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sooo conclusion:
if you've drawn what you tried to draw it worked out closely to perfekt. shure i can say that thing with the light, but to be honest thats somthing that doesn't disturb the pickture. It is only a negative point if you want to draw realistic. if you wan't to give the whole drawing a mysterious look (or probably only a "it should look good" look) the use of more then one and also imaginary lightsourses is a common way whitch even some of the biggest artists in history have done.
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Bikad [2015-05-23 21:39:34 +0000 UTC]
again good, good
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TheBurning1 [2015-05-23 20:45:53 +0000 UTC]
Very nice!
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