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Luna and Dominico
Published: 2009-04-28 01:38:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 23088; Favourites: 685; Downloads: 350
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This was produced for a RISD Anthology, hopefully-potentially being published over the summer. I don't really want to do comics as a career, and I think this is typical of my major compositional weakness - diagramming! - but it was fun for now. The title page was created to enable two spreads and to avoid my other homework, woop woop!Related content
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great artwork and plot ; u ; heartbreaking though genuine
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These two are so so cute and well crafted in design and expression. Your panel design is super delicious here. Ee, I love those buildings and how you've used incorporated simpler graphic shapes into the environments! The story is also really sweet, baw, hurry home indeed ;^;. Well done! You've captured a delightful emotion through the whole piece ~
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digital? where?! 
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SO GOOD. The dragon's design is my favourite. Your watercolouring style is so clean and gorgeous ;;
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I LOOOOVEEE THISSSSS 
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This is absolutely gorgeous! Now if only I can get my hands on them
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Watercolor - then I scan in the painting, put it on multiply, and color underneath. It's fun. : )
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It sure does look like it 
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I love this! From the colors, style and to the facial expressions, are just beautiful. I love how you arranged and organized each panel.
Excellent work!
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This is both adorable and beautiful. Gosh, I wish I could paint nice, clean lines like you do. D:
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loved it and loved the story, though I wonder if it would be more powerful without the words at the end. Just the image of his sadness.
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beautiful artwork to what is a potentially amazing story. Good luck on getting published! Should be a shoe in
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Absolutely wonderful! Your style is very unique, and I especially love the way you colour. c:
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Great colors, drawing quality and designs~ <3
I like how Luna looks, congratulations for the DD
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Thank you. : ) : ) : )
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Wow I love the storyline! The coloring is beautiful and I already love the characters. It's amazing <3
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I love the tale, and the usage of watercolour! Outstanding!
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Wow! The illustrations were wonderful! I hope you do get this published :3
Congrats on the DD!
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This is.. wow. It's beautiful, and I love the little story so far! Sad to hear you don't wish to do comics for a living, I think you'd be damn good at it.
Anyway, thanks for sharing!
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Congrats on the DD.
Nice story. Hope to be reading more.
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this is stunning. First of all, the technique and the colouring is really really beautiful. Second of all the characters look unique. And what I liked most of all is that it's a comic that kind of shows reality - telling a child a really cool story about where someone went, and then being alone and letting yourself miss that person. Really well done!
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That was epic.
Or maybe it wasn't epic but it was pretty darned good.
<3
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your work is so lovely
the ending makes me want to cry because luna misses dad :'(
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That is mindblowingly pretty. I know you aren't considering, but you really should and could pursue this as a career. Fancy work.
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I love the title cover and really like how you do your speech bubbles. The sixth frame, which has 3 connected bubbles in it from Luna, is especially well-done. It could have easily become cluttered with speech but you proportioned everything perfectly.
The style of the whole comic is great, just like the DD suggester said, "...integrated the digital elements almost seamlessly with the traditional."
The only thing I might suggest is to get rid of the "The End" text in the last frame. Also, is the frame with Dominico on Luna's shoulders supposed to have bolded text?
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