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Published: 2005-06-29 12:04:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 3177; Favourites: 85; Downloads: 9
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Description I'm plauged in a world
That never ends
Alone in this place
I am condemned

Cursed to this life
Which has no plan
The pain in my heart
can no more expand

Watching and waiting
Just wishing to die
My soul is aching
My dreams cannot fly

I'm a person with talent,
A future to uphold,
But those are just many
Lies I have been told

I feel like I'm walking,
But not going any where
There is plenty of time,
But not one second to spare

Why am I still living?
What do I expect?
That an angel will come down
And save me from this wreck!?

Yet...there must be a small
Hope hiding inside,
Because surely I would
Have already died

How will I find this
Hope I seek?
When everything I hold
is so dark and so bleak

This must be the treasure
I've been waiting to find.
I cannot wait until the day
I will claim it as mine!

Hopefully, it's truth
will not stand to wait,
Because too soon,
Will be too late.
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Comments: 21

lea33515 [2018-02-20 08:20:34 +0000 UTC]

beautifully depressing

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Literri [2014-04-23 21:19:42 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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Eyrean [2013-06-11 17:21:10 +0000 UTC]

This makes me think of someone I know.

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Tanglestar1 [2013-04-26 22:50:26 +0000 UTC]

Hope is given, and you have done just that... so many people lose hope but reading something like this rekindles it once again. so thank you. its people like you who give hope again.

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RenosGirl77 [2013-02-13 17:00:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This pretty much sums up everything I am feeling right now. Thank you so, so much for giving me fresh hope.

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MsLev99 [2012-07-16 14:01:05 +0000 UTC]

this is a beautiful poem...Hope I can write something like this..^-^..

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SakuraHime011 [2011-09-11 11:33:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow. A beautiful poem ...

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xpeople1 [2010-11-17 19:08:28 +0000 UTC]

GYAHH! <3 it! : )

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BloodySnowStorm [2010-06-11 05:55:13 +0000 UTC]

Emotional, real, just like theway a lot of people (including me) feel. I really loed it.

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i-lie [2009-04-21 21:35:48 +0000 UTC]

Featured in my journal ^^

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i-love-everything [2009-03-04 02:50:27 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful very feeling poem , i liked it,
It pulled me in, something i can relate too...
amazing work

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originalsophie [2008-10-31 14:01:52 +0000 UTC]

Featured: [link]

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lonewolf-girl [2008-10-27 06:45:16 +0000 UTC]

that was one of the best poems i have ever read

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Dreamnorn [2008-10-19 18:40:13 +0000 UTC]

It is beautifully sad. Life can indeed sometimes seem so hopeless. ):

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the-Her0 [2008-07-02 21:01:48 +0000 UTC]

It sucks, I know. Life I mean, because the poetry is incredible. I guess that no words would take solace for what you feel. I know that, so I'll just cross my fingers for you. Hang on there, bro.

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LESEDEXX [2008-06-30 18:43:15 +0000 UTC]

omg this is awsome
i have no words
all i can say thanx for the post :]
it shows alot of ur emotions
and what u feel inside
just stay strong
and try to fight
because the point in this life
u will one day find.... :]

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usernames-are-a-drag [2008-06-20 08:06:53 +0000 UTC]

I love it.

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Outa91 [2008-05-28 17:13:30 +0000 UTC]

it's great

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ZephirMytril [2007-04-30 02:10:52 +0000 UTC]

lovely :3

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bobviller [2005-09-27 02:20:04 +0000 UTC]

wow i love the way you right and thqat is something that no one can take away that is a amzing how you can put your emtion in words like that

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MasterDuckie [2005-06-30 05:47:34 +0000 UTC]

Awsome Jenna.. I love this one.. so deep and dark and it shows feeling and emotion!!

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