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BrendanRizzo [2018-01-08 02:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Hello. I'm from .

First, I like how the subject of this artwork is floating in space. It makes the robot's pose seem more believable, as there is no gravity or surface anywhere. The background itself looks nice as well; I particularly admire the way all the colors blend together. The blue and the purple in particular look great. (And is that a planet in the background?)

I can see that the robot is drawn in a super-cartoony style, which seems to contrast with the background nebulas, which sort of resemble what you might find when searching through photographs taken by the Hubble Space Telescope. It's strange, but it isn't bad or anything. I also like the glowing blue from the robot's arms and propeller, as well as the shiny surface, even though I am not sure that the nebula in the background or the robot itself could produce the required light source, and neither is in the direct position for it. However, since this is stylized, I can see what you were intending in any case.

I do have a couple of critiques, though. The first is that it looks like the robot's iPod headphones are floating around and are not actually being held in the robot's hands. You may wish to take a picture of yourself holding something in order to look at how gripping is done. Second is that the robot isn't really listening to the headphones either, as they look far away from the head. (Though I acknowledge that it does not have ears the way a human would.) But these are very minor issues, which I would not even draw attention to if I were not making a constructive comment for the group. On the whole, I like this.

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craftsbyblue [2018-01-06 06:13:05 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I'm here to critique your lovely piece

I really like how you outlined this character in red and blue; it gives me the impression that I'm viewing them through 3D glasses . I really like the neatness of your lines as well, and how your highlights on the metal fits the bold, cartoon-like style of your piece. Lastly, your background is not only stunning, but it also contrasts against the character's color scheme and makes them stand out. Overall, you've done an amazing job with this piece!

My main suggestion would be to straighten the highlight on the propeller (?), as the shape and texture of the metal doesn't allow for the highlight to curve in this manner. Additionally, if the light source is coming from the front, I suggest highlighting more areas of the armor, such as the legs, to reflect that.

Hope this helps, and keep up the awesome work !

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theJfluffy [2018-01-05 06:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Super pretty!

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lepidolitecharolette [2018-01-05 01:17:46 +0000 UTC]

Dude this is super nice though, I think the glow is a little too strong/bright I suggest toning it down a few shades. Hope this helps!

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crystalmonsterBATIM [2018-01-05 00:34:00 +0000 UTC]

awesome job!!!

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