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Ride the story like a merry-go-round, meguri meguru ❤www.youtube.com/watch?v=5JvJ7H…
's drawing style finally changed a little, oh yes-
But this is another picture based off a song I used to listen to a lot when I was younger and starting out with drawing <333
So many mistakes on this, oh lord-
But I do kinda like how this came out here, so I'd really really really appreciate some critiques! Bad & good things that I would need to improve on!
Amanda Sabrie & Artwork belong to:
hope you enjoy!!
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okay, so I love the coloring, and I like how you used the colors to create invisible lines such as the mouth. it's visually appealing. now I don't like bright white flair over the head. it really distract the eye. as well, even though this is a bust shot, the legs missing make the character look like theyre floating, so either draw the legs or crop the photo, or even create a frame. anatomical, not much to complain about, since it's stylized. the major issue would be the palm of hand closet to the viewer, it should be little more rounded, cause it look like they're griping the handle with their fingers only, unless that was your intention, and even then the palm should be a bit rounded. overall, you did great job, and I hope you keep drawing!
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Thanks a bunch for the helpful critique! <3
Now, yes, I did go a bit overboard with the white light and it is indeed very distracting, I'll work on that!
And this is all traditional art
Markers, watercolors and ink.
I didn't really have the choice to frame this unless I would've done it digitally, but that would've ruined the entire fact of it being traditional!
And yes, I'm no magician at all with hands. In fact, I've only just began drawing hands without instructions or them somewhere behind the character or in the pockets. So thank you for that advice as well!
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hands is the bane of most artists, so dont sweat it too much. overall, I did enjoy this drawing, it was the vibrant colors that caught my attention. I have complete faith you will continue to improve! good luck!
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Hah, I'll try not to!
Thank you! I did take notice in that I've never talked to you before here, so it's nice that other people will give a critique on my art!
Not my friends, they just go too sweet on me.
Thanks you! <3
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Your art-style is, as usual, beautiful. In this particular drawing, it looks very clean and precise, though. The lines look nice and clear, and the coloring blends and matches well together. The detail is incredible, right down to the fangs of her teeth. Amanda herself looks very good, and the umbrella looks great in comparison to her as well. The BG also looks great as a bright contrast to her and the umbrella's darker look. It gives off the sense that she has a bright personality to her and very literally lights up a room. Overall, great job with this!
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Thank you for your opinion, Nina! <3
Still, no one has pointed out any mistakes, just said what they like about the picture, so I'm a bit sad
But overall, thanks for your lovely critique!
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Well, I think it's because it's great as far as a drawing goes. There are a few lines that could have been finished off, but at the same time, that seems to account for part of the appeal to the drawing itself.
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Ohhh Jesus nina you are so good at these o.o
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Haha, ah, well I don't run a critique account for nothing. ^_^
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Wait this is a critique account? o.o
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Oh, GOODNESS no! My Critique account is an alt account of mine. ^_^
This is me here
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I love how the colours look really welp together, the bright colouring of the background really polls you to the actual character in the middle, i also love how the bright colouring makes it look like a sunny Day even though she is holding a umbrella that is meant for rainy days making her look like she's in the young stage of her life. The two teeth in her mouth together with the sparkling like colour in her eyes make her look adorable and cute in many ways which get really well supported by the Orange colour of the background. Overall this is a really great drawing and in my oppinion of of your best til date.
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You didn't quite point out any flaws and what was wrong with the picture and that is mostly what critiques are about, not complementing but only the artworks best parts.
But thank you
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Well i didn't really see any negative points to it, thats why i didn't write them down
No problem amanda
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Oh my god this is so beautiful ;w; You did such a great job with the colours <33
Like always, so perfect and so beautiful ^u^ <333
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fduisjd d'aww, thank you so muchhhhh >//u//<
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Omg
This style is so adoablee!
Fufufuf ama-channn
She looks so cuteee! Its so prettyy
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Thank chuuuuu <333
Amanda looks like a vampire, wtf-? Q^Q;
Thank chu again, ammffggg
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haha yeah she does XDD
you're welcomeee
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Ohhh wow this looks so freaking amazing amanda, it really doos look good o0o the colouring fits so well together and The little details in her smile and the little teeth make her look so young and childish ^w^ a really amazing piece amanda ^w^
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Oh my, well you seem like a real critic to me xD Mind writing me and actual critique sometime? x'3
And thank youuu!! I think she looks kinda like a vampire here, but sdfg oh well >v<;
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Hèhè, you asked for it so i did x3 Sure i Will do my best to critique some of them ^w^
Its True, well then she is a beautiful vampire ^w^
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Well, there's and actual critique button there where you can rate this in shizzle xD;
Awweh ~
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Ohhh XD i totally missed the button XD
Its Just my oppinion ^w^
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