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Description A design i had made the last few days. Include a little introduce. Sorry for the bad gramma and all typos.



„BROKEN“


Caldari Tech II Heavy assault battlecruiser.

Special role: Covert cloaking device
- 100% damage bonus (similar to T II bs and can only fit 4 launchers)

length: 430 m
high: 101 m
width: 227 m


Introduce:

Years ago, there lived a scientist called „Erienne Takama“.
His previous interest was inventing warmachines. He was one of the best, and unique, in his job.
Then, there was the day, he didnt go to his job anymore. A call wasent sucessfull, and he was not present at home.
2 weeks later , he was found in one of his holiday houses.

-Dead-

But he was not the only one, who was there. A girl too, unknown for this moment, but it looked as if he had killed her.
His hands comprised a sword. An old pieces from the past of his Famely. It was given from generation to generation, and serveral hundret years old.
He has make a suicide with it.
A letter was found, where he had tryed to explained it.

It looked that he start working similar on his actual job, on a privat project. Which kind is unknown till today, but it was stolen by the girl death beside him.

If distrust conquered your minds..... and u think …...the love she gave... isnt realy true. If u look inside her eyes..... she smiled.......but at least u didnt know the real person behind it.
If u invest to get a real view, and hires peoples to get informations.

Thats Sick.

But at least i was right, she had stolen informations about my new project. Sold it …. Sold my trust for some f... uped isk`s.
She came back at home, gaved me a kiss and a smile.

In this moment..... I was „Broken“.

To honour the work he had done in the past, they called the ship „Broken“. His last word, and symbolic what distrust can do with a human. It came non visible, and if its close enough, it turns the full force on u.
The ship looks like the grasp of his sword.


Breg

Mac

Ps:There are so many beautifull concept`s and real art.
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Comments: 42

amaunator [2010-10-05 17:34:32 +0000 UTC]

pretty average.
and who the hell would want to fly a ship named "Broken" ?!

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MonsterRhino In reply to amaunator [2012-10-14 04:28:36 +0000 UTC]

minmatar pilots

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macmuelli In reply to amaunator [2010-10-05 18:57:06 +0000 UTC]

Hi,

The bonus for the winner ship (setted by CCP ) will show, how much peoples will fly it.
The name will be unimportant then.

If u dont wanne fly a ship, only because u dont like the name, u will probally loose some game experience.


breg mac

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CelestialSword [2010-09-27 20:50:03 +0000 UTC]

OK, I love this design, very good solid idea. One problem - it looks nothing like a sub-capitol ship. This could be a Next gen titan if anything. There is no way this is anything smaller. I would also love to see this ingame!

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sketchgoatee [2010-09-21 00:55:38 +0000 UTC]

Great ship, really fits well into the EVE universe, and I would surely run like hell if I saw one of those in red anywhere in the same system as me...

Good luck dude (though I'd re-submit with measurements in the pic to be contest legal).

:{>

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macmuelli In reply to sketchgoatee [2010-09-23 05:56:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank u,

I ve added the measurements to the picture and updated it.

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AgamonKat [2010-09-19 10:32:41 +0000 UTC]

This is a great model!

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macmuelli [2010-09-15 19:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Cinema 4d, Polycount 1.7 mio / 7 ships ( full scene), cinema 4d render engine

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Richardas [2010-09-15 19:21:58 +0000 UTC]

Yea, something wrong here. Witch 3D package you use? Polycount? Render Engine?

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juuge [2010-09-14 15:14:52 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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Bingokongen [2010-09-14 13:45:58 +0000 UTC]

Cool looking ship!

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Axel-Vindislaga [2010-09-13 03:08:34 +0000 UTC]

I think it's stolen due to the difference between the text and design quality.

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macmuelli In reply to Axel-Vindislaga [2010-09-13 05:48:52 +0000 UTC]

I ve modell this ship by my self. Not stolen from somewhere else. If it looks comparable to something else, plz show it.

Dont seed bad thoughts only with , What u think!.

My native language is german. English- gramma isnt the best.

breg

mac

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Furiousangel113 [2010-09-12 15:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Right, um. Back to the drawing board...

Damn nice model dude.

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macmuelli [2010-09-12 15:31:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank u all for the feedback and your positve comments.

I ve rendered a close up with an 1.8 m sized men to have a look at the dimensions.

[link]

it should be right yet.

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itburnes [2010-09-12 14:36:48 +0000 UTC]

if it doesn't win........bloody Brilliant concept!

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macmuelli [2010-09-12 06:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Hi Zendoran. U brought me to check up the size again.

I ve booled all objects together and reduced it similar to this size.

X: 430 m
y: 101 m
z: 227 m

So u right, and the dimensions are a bit diffrent then i wrote inside the first post.

Fixed it now.

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Zendorea [2010-09-12 01:30:02 +0000 UTC]

If this is your final submission it will be disqualified as it does not have the dimensions inside the graphic its self.

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sonic-fan84062 In reply to Zendorea [2010-09-18 04:57:14 +0000 UTC]

uhhhhh.....what?????

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Zendorea In reply to sonic-fan84062 [2010-09-18 04:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Only 6mo???

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sonic-fan84062 In reply to Zendorea [2010-09-18 05:05:20 +0000 UTC]

??? *has absolutely no idea what your saying*

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Zendorea In reply to sonic-fan84062 [2010-09-18 05:07:47 +0000 UTC]

sorry.... you need to add the measurement of the ship within the picture its self.....

CCP and DA will not take measurement that are notated in the description only you will need to add them to the actual submission.

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Renegades0ul [2010-09-12 00:54:24 +0000 UTC]

i do realy like this one... the only problem i have with it is that it looks SO much bigger then 430m ... id have given it Battle ship to Dreadnought size at a first glance...

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shunterx2x [2010-09-11 20:27:30 +0000 UTC]

thats nuts loves it that is DEFO! the CALDARI race lol
\o/

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Hrothgar-Doran [2010-09-11 19:39:28 +0000 UTC]

Pretty effing sick man. Would so fly it.

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t0mpi [2010-09-11 17:40:27 +0000 UTC]

This the nicest in the concepts, it have many of details. Congrat, good mesh Mac!

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jianhan111 [2010-09-11 15:02:38 +0000 UTC]

ARGHHH there goes my chance of being int he top 15 even.. o well, dont even know if i should try

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Peace-Tank [2010-09-11 14:43:54 +0000 UTC]

BRAVO!

I can tell you play eve, and you've got the style down pat.

Good job! This is one of only two good entries Ive seen so far!

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sottan [2010-09-11 12:01:42 +0000 UTC]

jizz...

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macmuelli [2010-09-11 08:39:31 +0000 UTC]

atm i use cinema 4d to model ships.

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torch2005 [2010-09-11 05:48:24 +0000 UTC]

yeah... that's gonna win...

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Cruzcontroll372 [2010-09-11 01:27:52 +0000 UTC]

what program do you use?

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Boxghost102 [2010-09-11 01:20:05 +0000 UTC]

so awesome you should make a TV series about it

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Extraxi [2010-09-10 23:21:54 +0000 UTC]

CCP WILL show interest in this! Exceptional design.

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XISAWORD [2010-09-10 22:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Lovley ship, and from a true eve player, i think thats gona make all teh difference when CCP come to look at them

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sonic-fan84062 [2010-09-10 22:05:40 +0000 UTC]

well i was gonna enter but now im not sure since i don't have a 3d graphics thing and their no way in hell your gonna lose this contest

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RQAlucard [2010-09-10 20:52:23 +0000 UTC]

Crap, there go my chances of winning this contest...
Damn nice ship

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Deathwray [2010-09-10 20:49:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice details. I love Caldari design.

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Javelin-06 [2010-09-10 20:44:24 +0000 UTC]

Very sexy. Nice job.

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macmuelli [2010-09-10 20:39:41 +0000 UTC]

Ps: but adding a modul like a lockbreaker would be cool as an extra bonus

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macmuelli [2010-09-10 20:37:32 +0000 UTC]

No this would be overpowered. But u would be able to come closer to your target.

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forte805 [2010-09-10 20:32:59 +0000 UTC]

nice design, do u mean that this can fire while cloaked when u state the 100% damage bonus?

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