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noirfreeman23 [2010-04-01 00:56:39 +0000 UTC]
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Kiokuffiib11 [2009-12-18 04:37:17 +0000 UTC]
I'm curious where you're going to take this.
Is the Panthress going to be jealous of Occulta?
Is the intruder going to be a help or a harm?
Are you going to let the panthress go back to her dull past form?
Kind of suspenseful. And I wonder what you have in mind for Occulta.
She's definitely going to be a more formidable foe. However, you should do something about her personality with the zap. Make it less childish.
I can't wait!
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Mad-Mikhail In reply to Kiokuffiib11 [2009-12-18 06:32:48 +0000 UTC]
Well, you'll have to wait and see. It may be hard to believe, but I myself have only a hazy idea of where this will all end.
It's possible that the Dark Panther might feel Occulta is a rival for the Mad One's affections.
The intruder, the Disruptor, will likely be true to his cognomen and disrupt things whether he means to or not.
There is hope for the Dark Panther to revert (not your preferred outcome, I know), but not unless someone with good healing tech, like the Future Girl, can defeat her and that is a tall order with her innate power the backing of Mad Mike's tech. Certainly that was what her patron, Kaanga, was hoping for when he approached Mitsuko.
As for Occulta, she will face the quantum disruptor in the Mad One's lair as you suppose. Whether it makes her more mature as an evil-doer than she has been as a heroine remains to be seen. Frankly, I kind of like her impulsiveness. That's a character flaw, I know, and it's the same kind of flaw that is going to get the Dazzle Dolly into trouble shortly.
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gytalf2000 [2009-12-17 21:05:14 +0000 UTC]
Hey, I like Frik and Frak! Funny! "Dumber but more obedient" than Rusty Dreamer -- not to mention, no violent proclivities!
Nice character traits for minions!
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tigersdrool [2009-12-17 19:20:30 +0000 UTC]
Great work, as always. ^^
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