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MandieLynn — The Ghost

Published: 2004-03-30 17:33:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 19
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Description The Ghost


She comes to me every night.
She watches me as I sleep,
She is my dreamcature.
She is my hope,
She is all white,
Yet she is sad.
Sliver tears roll down her cheeks,
Chains tie her to my floor,
Enabling her to leave....


By: MandaLynn
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Comments: 10

AirenWoodmoon [2004-06-16 21:59:49 +0000 UTC]

I like the tension between the last two lines, it's a little odd but effective to what I think you're getting at.

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MandieLynn In reply to AirenWoodmoon [2004-06-17 02:05:26 +0000 UTC]

well at least some one does

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AirenWoodmoon In reply to MandieLynn [2004-06-17 02:13:40 +0000 UTC]

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MandieLynn In reply to AirenWoodmoon [2004-06-17 02:14:26 +0000 UTC]

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SpyderJade [2004-04-01 06:25:09 +0000 UTC]

Remind me friday.

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MandieLynn In reply to SpyderJade [2004-04-03 15:27:01 +0000 UTC]

i'm reminding u.

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MandieLynn In reply to SpyderJade [2004-04-01 11:28:05 +0000 UTC]

ok of what? that ur picking me up? or somtheing with the poem? or somtheing that has nothing to do with eveything and everything to do with nothing?

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SpyderJade In reply to MandieLynn [2004-04-01 20:51:23 +0000 UTC]

choices C and D

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MandieLynn In reply to SpyderJade [2004-04-22 02:37:31 +0000 UTC]

u ever going to tell me what's up with this poem?

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MandieLynn In reply to SpyderJade [2004-04-01 20:55:37 +0000 UTC]

i didn't letter them but ok. but i did figure out what u ment.

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