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Published: 2011-09-01 22:35:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 2763; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 55
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Description EDIT: Got this one in on time, but I'm still not done with my Provost's Dog entry. TAT

Also, I want to petition to draw more pages for this entry. I think I'd need two or three more pages--I just want to show the killing devices climbing over Haven's wall!!! >_<

Random scribbles on bottom of page because I get distracted easily.

BTW, can anyone tell me what a good onomatopoeia for a trumpet call is? 'BRRRMP' sounds more like a fart than a brassy alarm. Heh.

Last note, paneling gets easier and easier every thumbnail I do! Woohoo!

10 of my 11 pages. I'll figure out a cover page later.

This one initially gave me trouble just because... I didn't have a clear idea how Haven was laid out. I actually drew out my own map based on Tammy's descriptions of the camp on pages 77-78. Now I know better There's a fully drawn map on page 206. I can't believe I forgot that. ;;

Anyway, I actually had more fun doing these thumbnails than my Terrier entry... there's a lot of stuff going on, and it moves quickly, and for some reason I was able to fit a lot more in 6 pages than I was able to with a lot less (and 5 pages) for my other entry. Did that make sense? >.>;

Page 6 shows the conversation between Kel and Fanche.

Now... to finish these entries!!
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Comments: 6

Atlanta-Lemento [2011-09-09 08:41:46 +0000 UTC]

can't really read the writing but the drawings look great, especially the ones at the bottom

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ChocoCherry1 [2011-09-09 00:15:17 +0000 UTC]

Really detailed! LOVE your style, so keep it up!

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keishikouen [2011-09-08 07:15:17 +0000 UTC]

Umm, I was just wondering if you knew this but there IS an actual map of Haven in Lady Knight.

[link]

Also, I drew up a look alike map of the one in the link above, if you'd like it.

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Maseiya In reply to keishikouen [2011-09-08 14:46:56 +0000 UTC]

Haha, oh yeah--I said in my description that I eventually remembered the map on page 206 in the book. But thanks for the help!!

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whitelyte [2011-09-02 05:46:32 +0000 UTC]

Moar please

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Minuiko [2011-09-01 22:59:12 +0000 UTC]

That gladiator emoticon is the cutest thing I've ever seen 8DDD

It looks good so far! For the last panel in page 5, give Kel more open, loud body language since she's yelling a command. Maybe an upwards perspective as well? And page 6 looks rather busy (13 panels) but it is a battle, and having all the panels so tight together probably helps establish tension. I'll have to see the actual page, can't tell from the thumbnail whether it'll be too crowded or not .

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