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Maklos [2016-05-29 06:19:37 +0000 UTC]
Damn that's some deep shit, bravo Meiseki bravo,
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Meiseki In reply to Maklos [2016-06-23 21:38:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I'm glad it had an impact for you~
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LordAresWar [2015-05-12 20:43:24 +0000 UTC]
War sounds like me. People even said im a spawn of war
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GlenSpratt [2014-08-30 19:37:34 +0000 UTC]
In love with this poem.
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GlenSpratt In reply to Meiseki [2014-09-14 11:01:41 +0000 UTC]
inspired me to write a short story. I rarely find inspiration from random people, particularly a random person's poetry, but I guess you must be an exception, so thank you.
Regards,
Glen
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theIIofswords [2009-12-04 14:59:46 +0000 UTC]
It's beautifully written, for poetry not being your specialty, (which is hard imagine based on this piece, and your other works.) It almost reads as if it was a passage from the bible, or some kind of scripture. This would work well in something like a philosophy or religious class as well, as there is a lot that can be considered in this poem from those points of view. Its very nice.
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Meiseki In reply to theIIofswords [2009-12-06 21:37:57 +0000 UTC]
.............. Hello, person who is clearly Jim.
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theIIofswords In reply to Meiseki [2009-12-10 07:19:17 +0000 UTC]
Hello. Yes its me, it has been some time. I noticed a post of yours on Kc's work the other day, then I saw you posted this piece. I think its very nice, it reminded me of this Divine Comedy manga I was reading around the time, so I thought I'd add my 2 cents on it. It reads very well seems like your writing is as good as ever. It really is a beautiful piece, I hope things have been well.
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