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Published: 2005-10-03 07:30:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 210; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Life is a passage, a journey

We wonder this passage, searching for something

This something can not be answered that easy,

Death will reveal all,

Comfort zones we trust we rely on, as humans we do we do,

One thing we all need is love someone to cherish, hold

The one person that no matter what happens you can rely on,

What happens when they betray us, we fail destroy ourselves,

Suicide is this really the way?

Drowning in my sorrows,

Death seems to feel right,

Why can I not succed in fulfilling my wish to die,

This is not the answer this means you were not who I thought you,

I feel sorry that you can not come to terms with who you are,

Good bye


Writer Bryce Yeoman
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Comments: 9

ummm321 [2005-10-04 23:25:10 +0000 UTC]

I love it! i know exactly what you mean some of the things in this i have well thought to myself in my head before.
but i have you to rely on and well you have me and i will never betray u i promise just as long as you never betray me
i will always b ur good friend always no matter what,
its weird i can trust you, i dont usually trust people the way i trust you, i would trust you with my life if i had to and well i dont know anyone else that i would
you know me better then some of my oldest friends who i thought would always know me the most, but i've lied to them about stuff in the past about myself but i havent lied to you.
i'm glad i met you and that you are apart of my life
thankyou for being my friend and liking me for who i am
thanks

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Metal4ever In reply to ummm321 [2005-10-05 08:02:03 +0000 UTC]

ok no problem alright been taken back not much to say WOOt you havent lied to me all good

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ummm321 In reply to Metal4ever [2005-10-05 23:58:05 +0000 UTC]

lol i can be a bit odd at times cant i?
well ehhh i got nothing much to say now so laters

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ummm321 In reply to ummm321 [2005-10-08 03:32:02 +0000 UTC]

how about when I'm odd your perfect and when your odd I'm perfect then at least on eof us is prefect all the time

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Metal4ever In reply to ummm321 [2005-10-06 05:18:16 +0000 UTC]

if you can be odd then what the hell am i

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WildFoxx [2005-10-03 10:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting man, are you feeling low at the moment?

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Metal4ever In reply to WildFoxx [2005-10-03 10:46:42 +0000 UTC]

not really reffering to the past thoughttime i submited somthing new to really unsure on that one

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WildFoxx In reply to Metal4ever [2005-10-03 20:40:46 +0000 UTC]

OK then, its very good through

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Metal4ever In reply to WildFoxx [2005-10-05 08:02:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man

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