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monkeyfunky — The Lost
Published: 2004-11-08 02:20:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 91; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 7
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Description I feel the burden of loneliness,
hate and vengefullness,
exiled and lamented.
When will this's hate be corrected?

I am the lost...
Branded the strange,
on the soul's open range

I am the lost.
I am the reliquished.
I am the tossed.
I am the banished!

I am the far,
the obvlious sight,
the wrongman's right.

I feel the hate growing inside me,
for ever,
forever!
When will this pain be...gone.
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Comments: 24

donaldsfan [2004-11-17 01:15:50 +0000 UTC]

nice! u dont rhyme to often. i mean u dont do that too often. this is good.

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monkeyfunky In reply to donaldsfan [2004-11-19 03:13:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks I guess, I do try to rhyme in everyone...I guess I'm doing a poor job.

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donaldsfan In reply to monkeyfunky [2004-11-24 20:02:42 +0000 UTC]

not like this tho.

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monkeyfunky In reply to donaldsfan [2004-11-25 01:55:32 +0000 UTC]

ah...

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APCfanchik [2004-11-08 16:11:15 +0000 UTC]

... damn you... you're pain is my fault... and i know that... and i tried to kill myself 3 days ago because of all the pain i cause everyone... and the pain they cause me for blaming everything bad in their lives on something i did... i'm tired of it.. i'm going to stop feeling sorry for myself.. and for you.. i'm tired of this shit... i don't know if you put these up just to see if i'll read them and i do... but it feels as though you're just trying to twist the fucking knife in my heart... i'm trying to remain calm... i'm trying my hardest... but it's kinda fucking hard to pretend like nothing's wrong when EVERYONE IN MY LIFE HATES ME!!!! damn you... damn you to hell

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monkeyfunky In reply to APCfanchik [2004-11-09 03:19:18 +0000 UTC]

not everything's about you.

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APCfanchik In reply to monkeyfunky [2004-11-09 14:15:28 +0000 UTC]

yeah.. and not every thing is about you either... i know i wasn't the only thing that did this to you... i know that... but the way you write... it's as if you're writing to me... trying to make me feel like shit.. whether that was your intention or not, that's what it's doing...

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monkeyfunky In reply to APCfanchik [2004-11-10 02:41:34 +0000 UTC]

I write what I feel, it's up to you if you read it.

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APCfanchik In reply to monkeyfunky [2004-11-10 14:14:29 +0000 UTC]

whatever

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SweetFairy32684 [2004-11-08 15:56:37 +0000 UTC]

beautiful but also sad Heres you a big hug sweet and grrrrrrr because the hug is soooooo big and tight lol

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monkeyfunky In reply to SweetFairy32684 [2004-11-09 03:23:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you liked it.

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XoKazeoX [2004-11-08 04:55:45 +0000 UTC]

Man...I love your work. This piece and quite a few others of yours hit home with me. You have a gift with putting feelings into words.

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monkeyfunky In reply to XoKazeoX [2004-11-09 03:21:51 +0000 UTC]

I have so many emotions to show... and thank you, people like you keep me writing.

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XoKazeoX In reply to monkeyfunky [2004-11-09 04:52:48 +0000 UTC]

No problem thank you cause it's work like yours that makes me think a little harder and feel a little bit more.

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monkeyfunky In reply to XoKazeoX [2004-11-10 02:42:57 +0000 UTC]

you praise me too much

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XoKazeoX In reply to monkeyfunky [2004-11-10 05:39:40 +0000 UTC]

heh don't be modest

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monkeyfunky In reply to XoKazeoX [2004-11-11 02:15:26 +0000 UTC]

don't try to be so wise

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Yosha [2004-11-08 04:31:21 +0000 UTC]

:: I wish I could give you a big tight hug sometime soon. ::

You're rather pessimistic. ::

But I'll hug you anyway to try to make you feel better. ^_^ ::nodnodnodndonodnod::

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monkeyfunky In reply to Yosha [2004-11-09 03:20:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry...and thanks for carring.

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LostReality [2004-11-08 02:54:13 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful. sad, but beautiful. good job.
are you feeling any better?

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monkeyfunky In reply to LostReality [2004-11-09 03:06:16 +0000 UTC]

I wish.

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LostReality In reply to monkeyfunky [2004-11-09 20:12:17 +0000 UTC]

why?

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monkeyfunky In reply to LostReality [2004-11-10 02:28:05 +0000 UTC]

I wish I was feeling better.

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LostReality In reply to monkeyfunky [2004-11-11 01:52:45 +0000 UTC]

i hope that you feel better soon.

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