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Never changeAlways look for the truth that they hold
Always
and never
They remain alone
Yet never alone
Togther
And I am with them
Alone
thinking that there is a way
Looking for escape from this prison
I cannot change
They cannot change
You cannot change me
Feelings cannot enter this sanctum they have created
I do not want them
I need them
I walk outside the wires
tearing at my skin
At my soul
And you say everything is going to be alright
But you are not from here!
And you do not understand
This is my home
My prison
And remain here I must
For one day more
Forever
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Comments: 18
I really love this, it's definitely my favorite so far. I share the same thoughts, although mine probably aren't to the extreme yours are. But I know what you mean, at least- I'm stuck here, and I always will be. It's my home, and I can't leave it, no matter how wrong it is.
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Isn't is all just dandy?
The concept of home seems seems so foggy sometimes.
The problem with my home is the fact that it's a closed community. Just to become a member here you have to go through a 4 year testing period. Being born and raised here makes leaving almost impossible. As long as you live here they take care of everything for you. The moment you leave your completely abandoned. That's part of the problem at least.
*sigh*
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Wow, that is WAY worse than my home. I guess I just feel like I have to stay here, to take care of everyone. I mean I honestly don't know what it would be like without me. I do a lot of stuff for them, and I feel like I owe my family a lot, which I do. But at the same time, it's like, I'm not happy here. But I'm totally willing to sit here and, well, be depressed a lot of the time.
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It's the same here on the femilial scale and also on a much wider scale.
We're encourged to do all we can for the community. Which is well and all but it's encourged on the level that we give up our life entire life for something we might not belive in. It's an interesting sort of life. Depressed I try no to be. Writing the whole idea of where I live might take a while, but I'm always willing to explain more.
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Hmm, well here I'm not exactly 'encouraged,' as much as I was raised that way. When I was growing up, it became a game of, If you do what they want, they're happy, and its good if people are happy. So, I figured, if I was what they wanted me to be they'd be happy, and it would be better for all of THEM to be happy and me to be unhappy then just me be happy and all of them upset. I thought it would be kind of selfish of me. But depression, well, it's hard to get rid of after a while. It becomes so familiar that being happy is scary, because you're so not used to it. I'm getting better, though, thanks to friends.
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Here it isn't based on the whole being happy thing as much as for the good of the community.
We're supposed to be getting a socialist education but they screwed it up on so many levels.
As for depression I used to be depressed as well untill I decided not to be. Optimism works so much better to deal with life. It's forced at first but quickly it becomes real.
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Yeah, I'm getting used to it now. It's strange how different our societies are, but how we both get the general feeling from them. Of course yours is more severe, I don't even know what I would do if I was in your place; to be honest, I'd probably leave. But then, I think you mentioned, there would be consequences.
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Lol.
It sounds like a movie.
"The consequences will be dire". It's not that much of a secret service thing, it's just the problem of being so dependent of my community for so long and then haveing no support at all that makes it so hard to leave.
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Yeah, I can see where that would be a problem, and kind of scary. Oh well, life is never completely satisfying, right? There's ups and downs. I guess we all just learn to live with it.
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Because if we woulden't learn to live with life it would be called death 
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Hiii again xD~ I like the feeling of it alot. It flows really well, and there's no part where it just stops and lose it's ideas and feeling.
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This poem seems pretty good
I like the way it flows nicely
I also like the contradition between the begining and the ending... They seem to make no sence, yet, while you read it, it makes more sence then a lot of things
Good work
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Thanks and thatnk you for the comment.
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I think your poetry is kinda likesome of my poetry.. flowing language, interesting images, it rings true yet the meaning is obscure to one who doesn't know you and doesn't know what you are talking about, kinda a private message to those who know, not by intention so, but because only those who know can really understand. and I think you come from a really differant place than me. I recognize the style, but not the message.
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Your probably right. A lot of what I write is written as an insperation I get from events in my life. And a lot of it is written for some people. But I still try to put a general messege in them so they would be clearer for others as well. Maybe I am a little too obscure.
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