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Published: 2012-08-09 09:34:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 191; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description There's no end to ecstasy.
No end to cravings-
thirst.

I want you.
In a way that I can only describe
as animalistic.

Your clothes,
which youve taken such care
in choosing,

would be tossed aside,
forgotten.
I want what's underneath.

Your toned frame.
Rigid-
with muscle.

The smooth skin of your neck and torso
are entertainment
for a ravenous mouth to discover.

One hand to memorize
the contours of your back,
then draw it back to you in scratches.

The other will explore.
Taking in anything
that's yet to be revealed.

You would feel the fire
in your blood,
that drive that pulls me to you.

I would make you endure my ecstasy.
My thirst.
My desire.

Until you collapsed
for a moment
to breathe.

Only to get up again
and pay me back
for the things I did.
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Comments: 9

elvenari [2012-08-11 17:41:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Just...wow.

This doesn't describe me personally, but oh, it's the perfect description of the relationship between a couple of my characters. They fight, it ends with them making out passionately That's another reason why I totally love this. I also love it because it's just so deep and moving and it's true...very true for a lot of people.

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moonlitwarrior95 In reply to elvenari [2012-08-15 04:53:00 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks

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nigelsum [2012-08-10 07:15:50 +0000 UTC]

seeeeexxxxyyyyyyy. very cool

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moonlitwarrior95 In reply to nigelsum [2012-08-15 04:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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RubiCub3 [2012-08-09 22:10:35 +0000 UTC]

People only give your writing crap because their jealous that they cant paint words on paper as beautifully as you do hun! I love this peice! A lot of your writing is deep and moving and says things that most people wouldn't be so bold as to say. That's a good thing!
btw... We need to have another coffee date! <3 love you!

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moonlitwarrior95 In reply to RubiCub3 [2012-08-15 04:41:20 +0000 UTC]

lol or they're embarrassed cause I turned them on LMAO
aww thank you darling! Let me know when you're not grounded! I'm up for it!

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RubiCub3 In reply to moonlitwarrior95 [2012-09-23 05:20:26 +0000 UTC]

Lol yeah its probably exactly that reason
yeah I definitely will!

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Alaminia [2012-08-09 20:42:20 +0000 UTC]

i like it ^-^ i give no crap here XD

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moonlitwarrior95 In reply to Alaminia [2012-08-15 04:33:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you darling

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