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Zakeno [2009-11-12 02:47:09 +0000 UTC]

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HOLY MOLY!

THIS IS AMAZING. u @

SERIOUSLY; ONE OF YOUR BEST YET!! <3

Okay -ahem- done with happy spazzing. Time for CRITIQUUUUEEEEE. -coughhackwheeze-

first: His chin is wayyyyy small compared to his... upper... lip... thing (Top half of the muzzle? I dunno how to say it. PLACE UNDER NOSE WITH WHISKERS COMING OUT FFFT. D|< ). I'd make the upperlipthingamabob a tad smaller and the chin a bit bigger if I were you, for future reference. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)" />

Secondly: his arm looks a little stiff. IT should be bent a bit at the elbow (secretly Harvey can't lift his Hammer; he's too weak. Usually it's on the ground at some point for extra support. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Wink/Razz" />)

Thirdly: A little deeper shading on the face would be good; but this is AMAZING for your first real heads-on shading thing.

e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart" /> YOU ROCK

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RobertMakes [2009-11-25 02:35:04 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, from far anyway, this looked like it was made out of clay. Well, it looks really nice anyway. Nice job!

-Robert

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ShadowxThexHedgehogx [2009-11-19 16:38:32 +0000 UTC]

I love it, its just..to amazing for words!

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concordexlover [2009-11-12 20:23:58 +0000 UTC]

GODAMNIT MOOP, this is lush.

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Blubird101 [2009-11-12 15:21:23 +0000 UTC]

ffffffff this is amaazing <3 i love how you did his glasses haha
only crit is his chin kinda dissapears, but other then that, this is amazin!

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