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Published: 2004-06-27 04:32:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 40550; Favourites: 1635; Downloads: 457
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No one can see the pain that we hide,They're happy for us to keep it inside,
Our fear is our own; they don't want to know,
Why sould we involve them; why should it show.
You live your whole life in confusion and fear,
The need to feel something unbearably near,
Half of you living, Half of you gone,
And inside you know what your doing is wrong.
The thing's that can help, the thing's that may heal,
Are the flame or the blade and the sting of the steel,
The destruction of skin means the death of your soul,
But there's nowhere to run when your living alone.
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I really hate poetry usually. Not a sensitive man, very little artistic ability and pretty jadedΒ and I feel stating something simply is most often theΒ best way.Β Didn't mean to go on this site even I was searching for something else. Anyways I really liked this. Most of the poems I've read made me laugh, or shake my head. Some are whiney, stupid and speak of weak character. But everyone knows what its like to feel alone sometime and you did a very good job of expressing that.
I wanted to leave this an anonymous message but it wants me to join. I created an account that Il likely never use just because I wanted to tell you that. From aΒ tough cynical personΒ (Who again does not like poetry)Β Id say that means you have talent yeah?
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4 years late, but thank you.
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It took my heart... And crushed it!! I LOVE that poem!
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I like this poem, it really shows what some people think at times.
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OMG thsi is so beautifull I love it, even being a little dark you have an gift for poetry I think, because it really touched me.
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i wanna think that this is not true, andΒ I cant relateΒ but this has more truth than...than..I don't know ITS TRUE. Very good
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Incredible work!
Would you mind if I used parts of for a song in the band that im currently playing in 
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omg I love that, I feel like that everday but I love it when people like you can put all this into words! love that though
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thank you, these are the words i couldn't find myself
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Absolutely beautiful! It's breathtaking, insightful, and true.
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I am so alone...how do I have friends...I want to be alone forever
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Don't think of it as forever alone, think of it as forever available!
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Well, thats one way to think about it! I still do wonder how anyone likes to hang around me. In my eyes, im so lame
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I know the feeling, it's weird.
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I know, right?
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Awesome! That is waaay better then the crap I write!
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i was in a good mood till i read this now i am alone other than that amazing
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i love how you express your emotions though poems
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Beautifully written. That's the rawest thing I have read in awhile.
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I'm sorry... I know how this feels, and I wouldn't wish it on anyone. Not a single person... No one should have to go through that.
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I understand this completely, no one understanding you, all alone.....
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I feel so alone since some weeks that I cry when I read it.
Thanks
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I love this~
This isn't free verse, by the way.
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