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Mustache-Twirler — Joan of Arc and Sir Peccatori: Torn Asunder
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Standing atop the surface of a drifting universe, Rogue Peccatori prepares himself to defend his newfound home and those he cares for, against a force beyond measure that he is completely outclassed against, despite weilding tremendous power of his own.Standing by his side is a former corrupt Joan of Arc avatar who had been cured of her corruption and has done everything in her power to rally up her army of Heaven to unite with Pec’s army of Hell. Both legions are armed to the teeth with everything they could bare, from handhelds to tremendous war vessels spanning beyond the size of universes, multiverses, hyperverses and even the omniverse that drifts within the infinite dimensions to prepare for what is yet to come. For both angels and demons, positive and negative, rightious and evil, good and bad, all share a common arch-nemesis, against one being so horriffic, so vile, so taboo, that he should have never belonged in all existence and beyond.
Joan of Arc; “When that ###### breaches the surface of this omniverse, what are the odds that our combined firepower could even be able to meerly make his eyes twitch?”
Rogue Peccatori; “...0.0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000001%... I’m very sure that’s just when he’s holding back to toy with us, since he’s Outerverse Level.”
Joan of Arc; “DAMMIT! I bet the first thing that ######’s going to do is force-crush our vocal chords before we could exploit his weakness by criticizing him through word of mouth. And I found out he disabled us from casting defensive enchantments when writing criticism runes on our troops, weapons and ships, long before we arrived here! What are the odds that the natives here have against the ######?”
Rogue Peccatori; “I hope it would be 50%, though I have tried my best to boost their chances of stopping that bastard from-“
Suddenly, the entire omniverse trembles. Hyperverses rattle out of control, multiverses shake, and universes tremble! With one swing of his herculean hand, the arch-nemesis rips open the omniverse, as an epic soap opera choir of Latin can be heard all around! His power is outerverse level, his prescience makes those who oppose him shiver in despare, and he knows how much they all dread him!
For he is Admiral Narcissist Judgement, the GARY-STU!
Joan of Arc; “HURL EVERYTHING YOU’VE GOT AT THE ######!”
The entire forces of Heaven and Hell rain down a tremendous extra-dimensional typhone of assaults upon the dreaded Gary-Stu! Guns, arrows, cannons, lasers, zappers, missiles, rockets, bombs, hellfire, holy light, cosmic energy blasts, all of them land a direct hit upon ANJ... Yet none could even manage to make ANJ’s eyes twitch in distraction. Yet, just by simply shrinking his pupils with his irises, the entire army of the foreigners defending the omniverse are wiped out of existence before the Gary-Stu! Aside from ANJ himself, Joan and Pec are now the only other foreigners left standing, as the Gary-Stu marches onwards towards his destination!
Joan of Arc charges up all the power she has left and lauches herself with her holy sword, straight for the Gary-Stu, biding Pec time to power himself up to prepare for his fight. Yet it hardly even did anything, as one flip of ANJ’s middle finger, and Joan of Arc explodes into a Big Bang of blood, as her disarmed sword lands right in fromt of Pec like a grave mark. Peccatori looks below him to take one last glance at the universe he had found himself home in, and takes in his final thoughts in memory of those he cares for! After taking comfort of his cherished memories, Pec makes his stand and lets out a mighty roar against Admiral Narcissist Judgement, who is dangling the decapitated head of Joan by her hair like a cat’s toy.
Rogue Peccatori; “This world is NOT your property to puke out your sick, twisted, contradicting, edge-lord, power fantasies over, you-“
Realizing his omnipotence is draining from him due to the criticism, ANJ crushes Pec’s vocal chords! Desperation fills Pec as he hurls everything he has at the Gary-Stu, only to result in vain! ANJ simply marches through all of the attacks until he stands right in front of Pec! Refusing to back down despite knowing just how powerless he is against ANJ, Peccatori lets out one last explosion of his Infernal Blade Breath at his arch-nemesis in a final act of retaliation that can be felt throughout the omniverse... One flip of the middle finger, it was all Admiral Narcissist Judgement needed to do, and the entire bottom half of the once mighty Hellmouth Knight of the Inferno, explodes into nothing, before the Gary-Stu has Pec’s underbite torn out of his mouth, and his face violently slammed to the floor in a pool of his own blood!
Admiral Narcissist Judgement; “You, Rogue Peccatori, were once nothing but a pathetic and ridiculous shadow of who you once were. You are an insult to the embodiments of all evil that I rightiously slay... And now you are nothing at all!”
ANJ then tosses Joan of Arc’s head in front of the butchered Peccatori and the two are left to bleed as the Gary-Stu eyes upon his whoever Peccatori cares for that lives in the universe he was once guarding.
Admiral Narcissist Judgement; “I am the undisputed omnipotence, omniscience and omniprescience! I am the peak, pinnacle, center of all existence, non-existence, and beyond everything! And I am the perfect superhero of them all, for I alone will exterminate all villain viruses from existence, all who are not me!”
As ANJ marches past the crippled Pec and Joan, the Gary-Stu decides to mount Pec’s torn out underbite atop his head, like a jagged crown atop of a malignant tyrant, as he summons a giant tombstone shapped tablet that he’ll prepare to write the scriptures of his next uninspiring story on.
Admiral Narcissist Judgement; “I need you all to stay alive. I desire to have an audiance that’ll bare whitness to my magnum opus. I will have my prophecy, of a Chosen One slaying a Dark Lord, witten in stone!”
As the Gary-Stu forces everyone he had killed back to life and have them bound to seats spanning a stadium across the Omniverse, Pec and Joan, who are still alive, could only hope that the residents will fare better. For the residents themselves have been prepared in advance by the both of them for this. Written on everything native in the universe that is being invaded, Little does the Gary-Stu realize due to his arrogant ignorance, that he is marching straight into a trap, swamped with the enchanted runes of criticism... On how much he SUCKS as a Superhero!
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Those reactions fit quite well. Admiral Narcissist Judgement is by far my most evil character, for starters, he’s a Gary-Stu, second, he is merciless towards everyone that is not himself for he claims them all to be inferiors, and third, he claims to commit all of these atrocities because he thinks he is a superhero. His greates weakness however, is criticism.
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Maybe I should have done this more in order to bring in my point, but I say that it is certainly a good opener on how Admiral Narcissist Judgement functions as a character and being in this overarching omniverse. He is a satire on the superhero of the first hour, a super human that is so powerful that it is well beyond human potential. But much like it may happen to many, such godlike power does get into one's head and creates delusions of grandeur. This is perfectly reflected in his introduction, as it uses the trope of a chorus singing latin in order to create a forebodding atmosphere paired with divine symbolism. Given his perception of himself, he has become godlike and is completely indifferent about anything beneath him, unless it can serve for his own amusement and pretty much shallow goal. In fact, him trying to create a setting for a prophecy is immensely reminiscent of how in a traditional case of the chosen one trope the hero is chosen by a higher power to slay... either a dragon, a dark lord or a mix of both.
It is actually a very deep structure for the narrative as you utilize all the elements that are common for a hero like ANJ, and you invert them through him in a manner that unveils the flaws of 'heroes' that have no flaws.
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No problem there, I don’t tend to label these in order all that well anyway. And you superbly summed up the content of my post for who ANJ is and what he is like. Basically he is the the opposite to Master Fiendish in many way due to his god complex just by his introduction alone. Sorry I replied late.
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Thank you so much! I wanted to show just how dangerous and evil my disgusting Gary-Stu is, and that he gets what’s coming to him in the followup;
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What a shame, figured someone as powerful & as savage as Sir Peccatori would at least land a few decent blows on Admiral Judgment (maybe even giving him a nasty scar or two on his "perfect" and "immaculate" form) before getting his ass kicked.
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Pec and Joan in this post were only high-multiverse/near-hyperverse levels in the power scailing. Admiral Narcissist Judgement is beyond infinite dimensions, outerverse level.
It’s similar to a match up between a few mortals with firearms, pitted in a battle against Dr. Manhattan 3:20-3:36;
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Except the the fight is even more mismatched.
It’s like the quote from Akira Toryama, “No matter how strong one can become, there will always be someone even stronger.” Though the vile Gary-Stu could nearly be an exception.
I also had Pec get one shot as such to build up the karma ANJ will be receiving in the followup. Pec has been on decent terms with Starla, despite claiming himself to be her enemy, and he’s Nitrona’s boyfriend after all.
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Loving the brutality here, it really shows what sort of character Admiral Narcissist Judgement is. I'm sure they will get revenge though.
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Thank you, yes ANJ is a manifestation of the worst kinds of Gary-Stus merged with some of the triggered creators who lash out at criticism. Actually, Peccatori and Joan will be avenged.
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Ah I have encountered creators like that before. I really love the idea of this Gary Stu
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My goodness, words cannot describe this brutality. But they can describe this picture, its nicely done.
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Thanks! Admiral Narcissist Judgement is pretty much my most malignant character due to his overbloated ego, his completely unnecessary cruelty on others just so they can be written down in prophecy tablets and his complete disregard for all existence in favor of silencing those who criticize him.
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One can be sure Joan and Peccatori are not going to let him get away with this......
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Oh the Gary-Stu is certainly going to get what’s coming for him in the next post.
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I look forward to it.
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You're very welcome.
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a total display of butchery and very scary defeat, on a maximum scale of extreme brutality!
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Yup, Admiral Narcissist Judgement is my most evil character, and his ambitions are idiotic as well.
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