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Published: 2018-02-20 12:31:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 246; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 0
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Trying this baby !!___________________
It's the time for the killing spree
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Not literally in a killing spree I just like the terms..example ..bloodlust
And since my persona loves the night ..I just wonder why I never really draw one on her in it with testing out the axe!!
And sweet honey iced tea..I'm almost done with one art trade!!! (I "'m trying much more complex poses and not simple one cause I want to make it up to them for being slow ;w
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Life update:
I don't know what to do
Something is wrong with me to be honest
You guys might know or might not know about my condition with split personality...I notice that my head was twitching at school and at least I stop it for a few times and no one has notice...I ran into the bathroom to splash water on my face to be "normal" again and these past few days I'm always late going to school..not because of the distance (my house is really near the school like a less tHan 10 minutes walk there) but because I Don't see how I'll be able to face it..
I'm getting dull...weak...my hands make this weird claw like poses that I sometimes clench in to my skin to not show it
And I'm smiling for a long time that it hurts by now
But i'll be fine like always...right??...like always
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Number of hours: 4 hours and 37 minutes
Original reference: sta.sh/0xn3nzxa5vs (the character)
sta.sh/0ww45dxdna3 (the weapon!!!)
Character used: Mysterika by mysterika18
Artwork by mysterika18
Don't trace, steal, edit, re-upload or claim it as yous (FU)
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Comments: 39
my next critique target >:3 again, sorry for how harsh this is
i'll start with what my favorite parts where
i like the ambition, this one is not the most ambitious picture, i can see a lot, the action in it is really nice to, and i like that she has a weapon now ^u^
i'll start with lighting:
i'm to lazy to explain all this stuff, so i'll just do a paint over and let you compare
yours: cdn.discordapp.com/attachments…
mine: cdn.discordapp.com/attachments… (sorry if the red is hard to look at) and of course mine is not pirfect
there a fer things i would like to mention even tho i made that
while the shine in the ax blade looks good, its in the wrong place
and light travails in a straight line, no curves, and it only reflects of of shine things, although try to ignore the reflecting for now, until you can get the shading right
and i would say making her glow is not very great, but you can do some cool stuff with it, like a path from where she has bin to make her feel like she is moving, but the glow right now around the ax and her boots is not very well placed
also they glow on the eyes was a bit to much, try to be conservative when it comes to that, i know i dident show that in my example, but next time try just illuminating half of the pupil instead of the hole eye
for anatomy:
well, you made her stomach or tummy, REALLY flat, like i mean, the boobs and legs feel pretty 3d, but the tummy goes flat like paper, this is probably because of the shading, you diddent add enough highlights in front, and not enough shading on her back, the rest looks pretty good, so nice job on that ^u^
i think you could have done more with her positioning to make her feel like she is moving better and create a better feeling of 3d, to avoid the flat things, by curving her back, and making the line from shoulders not parallel to the line between the 2 hips (this very important in the hole dynamic thing i was talking about, it makes the pose feel more natural, and more in motion)
hope it was helpful ^u^ :3 and this is not the last of my critique prey >:3 XD sorry for the long comment
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it's fine!now let see
yes!thank you for noticing! I always wanted to give her a weapon but she already has one its a staff ---->>>
....but I didn't like it even though she is a mage and in anime or games mage are supposed to carry staff but i wanted mysterika to be different and for her to be able to fight and things like that so thus an axe!
if you look at the axe especially the rod you can see that the lighting was supposed to be at the upper right corner cause it was the original idea that the lighting should be at places like it was suppose to be and it looks like the lighting is in the wrong places for I changed the idea in between the processs(you can see in her two tails and boots that the lighting changed) and thus making it wrong and of course you're here and you realized that T^T but i'm cool with it since meaning next time what i originally planed should stay so i won't make the same mistake again(the reply before this one when i mention that i'm drawing a new one but it's mysterika again well I made the same mistake where the lighting didn't make sense especially the clothing but i'll try o fix it !!!)
oh and I knew something is wrong when i try to make her eyes glow thanks for the advice ^w^
*sigh* you're right ..i just didn't know here to add the highlights at this part and i thought i would mess it up and as for the shading you know what happens
like i said in the previous reply that when i sketch it always look so better like the ff:Screenshot 20180318-160649 Screenshot 20180318-160655
and base form what you said "
hope it was helpful ^u^ :3 and this is not the last of my critique prey >:3 XD sorry for the long comment " i'll be expecting soon
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cool ^u^ hope you nail the perfect weapon design for her :3
my advise for avoiding this problem with the shading in the future is after you do the flat colors, copy paste it before you start shading, and if you don't do flat colors, you either have to be a better planner, or be prepared to start over with the colors from scratch, but i recommend copying the color without shading onto another layer, or just doing everything right the first time
the sketches look better cause there less defined, i explained a good method of drawing in the last reply, so look for it there :3
i have no idea how soon, whenever i feel like it XD i do know i'll do that nude one next >
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I did it was used in the drawing :3
Well, luckily I do use flat colors soooooo~~ I can do this!!err use this advice if yours
Hmmmm...makes sense
But you didn't lol
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cool
this technique is good cause it makes it easy to start over if you mess up, i recommend making a copy a bunch of times, before you add something your not sure of
i'llo show you an example of one of my recent projects: cdn.discordapp.com/attachments…
i'm working that critique >__<
i was gonna, then you went and made that really cool, critique worthy art >:0
this one
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about to chop down a tree at night ^w^
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Haha x'D That was good
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Need to keep it pg13
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be careful who you swings it against!
and don't forget the midnight groceries (snacks)! XD
great work as always, and.. well, keep hanging on to anything that might help you ^^ , i hope your problems are.. settled peacefully
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that might be a problem cause it's nightime :3
she hunts down her food ! just kidding I don't think there are stores open at that time welp need to go traveling to find one
yeah, I've calmed down now likei said on my previous one as long as i convert it int drawings i'm fine
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but her eyes are glittering! doesn't that mean she got a natural flashlight? XD
ah, good one! clean clothes are always better than dirty ones XD
that's good then~ be happy!
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Probably XD because she loves the night she inhabits night vision and because of her magic :3
Yeah cause the blood is hard to remove (just kidding) she wouldn't do that for food she will kill for justice ..you know...when it needs to welp she need to find a store to get food from
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aah, flashlight magic best magic! XD
well, as long as it suits her interest better! XD
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Like i said, it's brutal and her looks more big than before OAO
Btw really nice drawing, her attacking pose is epic also the lighting really awesome OVO)d
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Yes! I always wanted to draw her like this poses and I'm glad I did!
Thank you even though I keep coloring bg with night sky
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Thank you for your kind words (>w<)/~~
Just some anatomy practice and lighting with weapons :3
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Okey right now i'm really envy you and your masterpiece
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You shouldn't !! Your works are really awesome so don't envy me or something
And besides I need to practice more and so do you !! Cause practice makes perfect or in my own words practice will give better results cause nothing is perfect in this world >_👍: 0 ⏩: 0
sabi ko itapon sa bulkan-
pero pwede rin na tagain xD
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Ah yes~~ :3 puntahan sa bahay at salubungin nito T_T
At drinawing ko persona nya err oc niya kasi profile pic nya un ;_; ipapakita ko sana sakanya kaso may iba pang nagdrawing ng chr nya at PRINTED PA at ung reaction nya wala lng.. paano pa kaya kung ako?? 3_3
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SUS .
YUNG SA NAG PRINT PANGET ANG GAWA
YUNG SAYOO BONGA!
>;0 KONPIDENS !! PAG HINDI TAGAAIN MOOO
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Di mo alam cut out pa un full body in colors
Eh ung saakin -->> sta.sh/01ndkju3wq4v
Headshot...HEADSHOT
Yeah...pag pinakita ko...malalam na lang =3=
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xD mas effort naman coloring mooo!!!!
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Ang edgy tulad nyo joke
Bahala na si Elias kaya ko to
Ipapakita ko to sakanya!!
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xD syempre naman tatangapin nya yan x3 tiwala langgg
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Tiwala na lang T_T
Kung Hindi alam na
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shh pramis tatangapin yan hahaha xD
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You're very welcome ^__^
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Thank you!! Like you said practicing backgrounds!! Even though its a simple one like this
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