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Aiecloud [2018-04-15 10:21:05 +0000 UTC]
this one is clearly one of my favourites drawing of you!! The colours and the ambiance are stunning, and the background is,, perfect ;;0;; and of course your character is still so beautiful, and the pose is on point!!!
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mysterika18 In reply to Aiecloud [2018-04-16 03:42:15 +0000 UTC]
thank you for your kind words TwT
i don't know how too respond to this
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Kh3mm4 [2018-04-13 15:02:42 +0000 UTC]
a deep one ~
and a damn good drawing with the perfect atmosphere as well *w*
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mysterika18 In reply to Kh3mm4 [2018-04-13 16:37:54 +0000 UTC]
Yeah~ one I'm really proud of but hey..still needs to be humble UwU
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Kh3mm4 In reply to mysterika18 [2018-04-14 13:17:22 +0000 UTC]
a good personality~ XD
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Thecat66666 [2018-04-13 13:22:28 +0000 UTC]
you're getting good, i was about to go nag you on other arts about you're faces, but this one you kind of just out of the blue, got it, nice job, i hope to see more of this ^u^
and i love the blur effects
you've gotten so good all i really can do is nit pick <_>
one thing i would say is i commend you on going out and trying to learn reflected light, i certainly diddent encourage you to do that (which idk why i did that) but when light reflects off of an object, it carries its color with it, so the reflected light on her shirt should be more red because its coming from the red circle that's behind her :3
the limbs are shaded very weirdly, the things covering the arms with the strips (i don't know what there called) have different quality shading, and a different placement of the shading, and as the audience to you're picture, i don't know why
also on the topic of shading, the more light there is in an area the brighter the shadows will be, so the shadow on her left boob is to dark
and add highlights to black
i also would suggest adding more highlights or bringing the shading out more, cause theres a lot of places that look flat
and theres parts of the circle that still need to be shaded, hair is still an object
cdn.discordapp.com/attachments… here is an example, but btw, the changes are so subtle i don't think you'll see all of them at first glance (cause i diddent XD)
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mysterika18 In reply to Thecat66666 [2018-04-13 16:37:05 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh
Yeah ..I'll definitely make more of this since for me it's definitely worth the time and effort to make
Oh and about those faces (I think your referring to the gifts I'm making)those are basically practices and since I can't think of a character to draw and I don't want to use my ocs (since I'll be needing them for future drawing like this one right here ..cause I'm gonna do a story like wise drawing ) and thus making headshot gifts ..not only it's a practice but at least I can show my appreciation to my watchers and friends and besides they are happy with it (I know...I know...I should use periods and commas)
Ohhh..I basically try to do that but I guess it didn't make it in the final output since when I draw a character then there is background..for some reason the character and the background doesn't blend together so I had to do this where a color of the background is that I overlay it with the character so it blends with the character
I thought I did ok at that part 3_3
But I could say that the right arm was weirdly shaded since I had difficulty in how the lights was coming from and how I could shade this part..But for the left one..I dunno I was proud of that
(No wonder the quality in each arm was different)
There is this artist where I realized that they put somewhat a highlight at the edge of the clothing and it looks like it gives a pop in the drawing which I suppose I should have done here. But I wanted to give this a darker tone but I guess well I should have done it T_T.
Why?
Yeah..now I know what highlights are for TuT ..to give a pop in the picture =3=..cause it looks flat..right? (Imma try it in the next artwork which also give this atmosphere..I.hope)
What? I thought it was ok..since when I try to add more it ruins it (or probably it's in the wrong placement 3_3)
I don't see it
At first
But I could see some changes
Just a bit
Just a tiny bit
I'm going back and forth to the original and this one
(Oh shoot just realized the discord part of the link]
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Thecat66666 In reply to mysterika18 [2018-04-15 03:01:09 +0000 UTC]
woo, gogo, make all the good faces XD ^u^
and the most recent ones i'm referring to having bad faces are The Music stop playing... and This Time I'll be Romantic (the girl in this one not the guy)
be more careful with the color of the reflected light next time then, maybe try color selecting and directly putting it over, or something like that
the right arm was fine i guess, but on the right arm was one of the things i changed in my version, and i wouldn't say the left arm was bad, it just had a few inconsistencies, and the right arm it hard to see cause its not in the focus of the picture, so you don't have to be as exact about that for it to look good (just don't get to lazy about that kind of thing like i do XD)
that's not the kind of highlight i was talking about (it is a highlight tho, so i should have been more pacific), i meant adding the color of the light, but i don't think you need to do that cause you already have that, if you want to know what i meant by that, compare the boobs in my version to you'res, idk if you wanted the boobs to be that big, but the same laws of lighting can be applied elsewhere
if you want to know why you should add highlights to black, look at the left arm in my picture where the black strips, there black colored but there not black everywhere on the stripe, and in daylight none of it will reach full black cause of ambient light
in short adding light to black color makes the object feel like its a part of the picture and not just a convenient black mark, and adds to the depth of the piece
my parts of the circle that needs to be shaded i meant to the left of her left shoulder, cause her hair is in front of that, and theirs part of the circle that blends into the skin and makes the shoulder pointy
theirs just a tiny bit of changes cause you're getting close to my level of art <_> but that tiny bit makes a lot of difference (what i want to believe)
XDDDDDDDD hahaha hah i'm not showing any one you're art without permission, theres a bot that i made that i pm to save links and upload images, i was using imgur for uploading images, but i realized that school wifi blocked imgur, so i stopped using it
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mysterika18 In reply to Thecat66666 [2018-04-23 05:08:24 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh..I assumed wrong..or I shouldn't have assume it in the first place 3_3......
Well I can under stand with the music stop playing (the face wasn't the best ) but what I don't get is the other one TwT...
Ok..I'll be careful =u=
I can somehow tell that you changed that part ..Cause I colored it like a line (?) But you somehow make it more well..give it a pop =3= and what really amaze me is the part of the gloves where you color it !! (I couldn't think of that way of coloring 0_0)
Ohhh ...yeah you should have been more specific (I'm going back and forth from the original and the fixed one)
I ..uhh...yeh
That would be common sense of why the black part would have a lighter shade (and common sense is something I lack TwT)I'll take note of that in the next time I draw her ..I hope
Okie doki I don't get it TwT/////!?!??!?!?!
These words are too big to understand even though older than you...
Oh I see!! I somehow understand that part of what you're saying
What I mean about the discord part was I almost forgotten about discord
And wait your school can do that??
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Thecat66666 In reply to mysterika18 [2018-04-24 16:24:45 +0000 UTC]
mah, you can assume if you want, but if you're wrong i'll tell you about it, but if you're right, you get the satisfaction of being right :3
kinda mad about the "music stop playing" one, cause the rest of the picture is so good
and for the the other one, i would say this is what i think it should look like
yus, be careful :3
do you see the difference? the boobs are probably the biggest difference, so stare at them good >:3 XD (sorry)
yah i did, also changed where the light would hit the arm, cause i felt you'res where off (don't think i touched the hand and glove at all, but i probably should have)
i had that feeling a lot <_< its harsh when something like that hits you in the face, but now you know :3
copy paste the the thing you don't understand in the next reply pleas, i don't know what you're talking about
YES!!! great
do it (discord discord discord) XD
yah they can, but not to phones for some reason XD
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mysterika18 In reply to Thecat66666 [2018-05-17 16:29:45 +0000 UTC]
;_; sorry ok??
I think as time flew by and looker at my old drawings I can definitely see the mistakes now (AHHHHHHHHHHH)
I'm staring at dem boobs
Oh what??? >:'o
I think I'll copy paste it when I finally got access to my lapputappu
At least I can copy and paste it with no problem unlike my tablet ;_;
Well you a smart Bastard like you said XD
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Thecat66666 In reply to mysterika18 [2018-05-17 23:11:52 +0000 UTC]
well glad you can see you're mistakes now, now go fix them and update the art
good look close and hard XD and dont forget to compare them to the ones in you're art to
XD yah, diddent mess with the gloves at all, they where all you
yah, gosh copy pasting on mobile devises is so damin hard to do <_<
ok, don't reply to this until you are on you're laptop then :3 (now you can procrastinate at this like hell)
exactly XD i figured it out
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mysterika18 In reply to Thecat66666 [2018-05-19 17:49:39 +0000 UTC]
Nuuuu
Lazy af
I like did already
I've lost count
Welp don't have access still ;-;
Welp that's someone who was suppose to sleep XD
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Thecat66666 In reply to mysterika18 [2018-06-01 17:30:11 +0000 UTC]
yeeeee! do eeet
XD then re count XD
rip, you where suppose to wait until you do have access, try again
sleep, who needs sleep? XD
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Iormi [2018-04-12 18:06:07 +0000 UTC]
Wow this one looks so pretty, the background and blur effect really is really nice OvO)d
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mysterika18 In reply to Iormi [2018-04-13 12:41:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
As time past I realize that I need to draw something with a story like feel and also a different way of coloring style
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Iormi In reply to mysterika18 [2018-04-13 17:10:07 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome ovo
It's good, trying something new is good, in good way ovo
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mysterika18 In reply to Iormi [2018-04-15 04:48:32 +0000 UTC]
But failure always happen soo uhhh
Good thing this end up decent
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Iormi In reply to mysterika18 [2018-04-15 17:58:30 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, and with failure we can learn more and be better ovo
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mysterika18 In reply to Iormi [2018-04-17 14:57:46 +0000 UTC]
True UwU/
But I saw a lot of people giving up when they had a lot ..I mean a LOT of failure
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Iormi In reply to mysterika18 [2018-04-17 17:09:24 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, some people lose their will because they always fails, so they need supports to ignite back their hope, some people have strong will not easy to give up after countless failure and even after they died U-U
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SleepingAyumu [2018-04-11 21:26:35 +0000 UTC]
It is great, and the fading effect is fab-
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xXAyaYuiXx [2018-04-11 13:58:22 +0000 UTC]
Cool~
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Joshipus [2018-04-11 13:57:56 +0000 UTC]
It's pretty nice you started to put backgrounds in your illustrations it really helps in telling the story of the piece~
Wow you are finishing this stuff like really fast~
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Joshipus In reply to mysterika18 [2018-04-12 00:53:22 +0000 UTC]
Still amazed on how fast you come up with something to draw tbh~
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mysterika18 In reply to Joshipus [2018-04-12 12:45:49 +0000 UTC]
But it's sometimes not really great since I have a lot if ideas and I can't seem to finish all of them and end up only with one actual artworks
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Joshipus In reply to mysterika18 [2018-04-12 13:23:17 +0000 UTC]
That does tend to happen..
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mysterika18 In reply to Joshipus [2018-04-13 16:43:56 +0000 UTC]
But better than an art block.soo yeh
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