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ManaAdvent [2011-03-23 13:46:34 +0000 UTC]
Very nice!
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yupon [2011-03-23 09:05:17 +0000 UTC]
cuuute character design! love her face and outfit!! your colouring is awesome too! good luck for the contest!
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Karusegawa [2011-03-23 02:21:06 +0000 UTC]
The proportion of the eyes and mouth seem too small. You should also use blur on the face, seems like it was ripped out of a photo and placed in the picture, since the rest of this piece seems too solid in comparison to the facial features (which are too blurred). Her left arm seems a tad short. Her left ankle seems like it's in a breaking point. The right foot seems a little similar only that in a weird torsion. The hips and below don't seem to in accordance with the upper body. The right shoulder seems too low, even to the point of being anatomically incorrect. The rest should be ok. You could've made the lineart a little more solid, though. Nice work here .
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Nahumania In reply to Karusegawa [2011-03-23 02:28:38 +0000 UTC]
-__- thanks but i didn't ask for a critique XD i know i have maaany mistakes XD
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Karusegawa In reply to Nahumania [2011-03-23 02:50:57 +0000 UTC]
Still, it's part of my job :3.
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