Comments: 58
SnowWhiteQueen2000 [2014-01-26 14:51:46 +0000 UTC]
I love how you made Crystal's expression. She's my favorite character!
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Mr-Primary [2013-11-09 06:03:19 +0000 UTC]
... I don't see why you need to re-teach yourself I think this comic looks great, I also love the slightly realistic art style.......
granted we are always our own biggest critic
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Indurok [2013-06-21 03:49:33 +0000 UTC]
Heh, just like Falco to boast.
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sakonaga1 [2012-08-31 18:32:07 +0000 UTC]
Despair? I think its a great page
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T-PAIN123 [2012-02-04 05:18:18 +0000 UTC]
This looks epic!
I plan on writing a story for Star Fox... I cannot draw for shit though.... yikes
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shadowfan76 [2011-10-17 17:01:43 +0000 UTC]
I personally like what you've done so far. I'm no judge of visual art, but I like how the story is going so far.
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OMGparodies [2009-08-06 19:34:00 +0000 UTC]
When you say "Crits", you remind me of Critical Hits in TF2. xO
Okay, uhm... Mind if I crit you with my bonesaw? :3
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LupinAKAFlashTH [2009-07-14 04:41:58 +0000 UTC]
XD Despair, eh? It's not that bad, I think.
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Toriku [2008-09-10 08:24:12 +0000 UTC]
teach yourself to draw? I dunno you seem perfectly capable to me
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RavarokJudge [2008-04-05 03:28:41 +0000 UTC]
the plot is now opening up even more.
very well done!
good old rack of money. that is a bonus.
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Julian2069 [2008-03-25 02:16:56 +0000 UTC]
Could you make more strips? It's just getting good!
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DarkFoxProjectX [2008-02-05 00:54:30 +0000 UTC]
HELL in my eyes your fucking good keep going with the story line it's fucking AWESOME! ^_^
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WildFox03 [2008-02-03 20:30:59 +0000 UTC]
Man im so loving this story...At first i thought the cat lady on the screen was Katt Monroe lol.
But non the less what i love so much it the expressions you put on there faces, you can almost taste the boringness of there new life eating at them it just wonderful how it been done!
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dwighthouse [2008-02-03 03:17:48 +0000 UTC]
Don't be so hard on yourself. The art is made of win.
I think Krystal may suspect something!
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YesImDeadpool [2008-02-03 01:54:17 +0000 UTC]
I hope you get the next few pages up and going soon.
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MasterSkadu [2008-02-01 19:59:39 +0000 UTC]
Interesting plot. I like this story is going, I can wait to see more of your work.
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RyuTheHedgeWolf [2008-01-30 20:22:17 +0000 UTC]
Wow! I've read all 13 pages so far!
This is quite amazing, I've never seen a Star Fox Fan Comic before!
*faves*
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BanditRingtail3 [2008-01-29 02:05:34 +0000 UTC]
You're doing pretty good as is. I'm not skilled enough in artistry to spot the mistakes.
Either that or I'm too thrilled with the fact you're making a Star Fox comic. ^.^ I'm gonna watch ya so I can catch the new ones!
Keep up the good work!
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megrandy [2008-01-24 21:39:22 +0000 UTC]
What do mean this is bad. I think its realy good. ^^
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SuperShadowman [2008-01-23 14:53:16 +0000 UTC]
Heh, this story is kicking off. Can't wait to see what happens!
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HeartBullitx92 [2008-01-22 10:19:13 +0000 UTC]
this comic is well drawn dude.
don't critique yourself unless other people are, i mean: look at me drawings!! i'm only 16 and i still can't draw good.....
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sexykrystal [2008-01-20 15:20:50 +0000 UTC]
it great !!!! I thought they never turn a job down?
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StarYoshi [2008-01-19 03:57:15 +0000 UTC]
"Why so sketchy"
It's referring to me wondering what it is about that woman that makes her seem so shady...
Sorry, didn't complete my sentence ^_^
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nuneya [2008-01-18 06:09:10 +0000 UTC]
Looks great to me, I'm honestly glad another page was posted mainly because I was starting to wonder what would happen next. The only thing I would say, and I don't mean this to be a critique, but more of a request for later pages, but in certain panels could you add more backgrounds in certain panels? I know they can be a real pain, as well as take alot longer on pages, but it makes your comic look that much better.
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RatchetJak [2008-01-18 03:13:28 +0000 UTC]
Aww this page doesn't look bad. = ) I think you did a nice job on it just like the other pages you did. ^^ I love the serious parts of stories, hehe looks like this client really is desperate. ^^
Can't wait to see what happens next.
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naviechance In reply to Adder1 [2008-01-18 04:33:59 +0000 UTC]
LOL, I agree. Rabbit soup tonight XD
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StarYoshi [2008-01-17 22:02:45 +0000 UTC]
Tried out the front view for Fox, eh? Eyebrow drop worked (yay!)
Back to it: Wonderful... my only wonder is... if 175k in Liat is the INCENTIVE... what's the PAYMENT...
And why so sketchy?
(Plot hole appears)
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naviechance In reply to StarYoshi [2008-01-18 04:34:26 +0000 UTC]
What do you mean, "why so sketchy?"
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TheNuclearFuzzball [2008-01-17 21:48:02 +0000 UTC]
Hm... I still don't trust that lady...
Keep up the awesome work!
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NozomiShiro [2008-01-17 21:39:53 +0000 UTC]
No worries ^-^ It still looks great :3 (a hell of a lot better than I could draw! XD; )
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Caped-dan [2008-01-17 20:51:18 +0000 UTC]
Yeah! keep it up! This is awesome work.
Only fan comic I actually love :3
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TheAlphaStupid [2008-01-17 20:47:28 +0000 UTC]
What the heck is with Fox? I think he's turning into a ferret. Well Criticism aside it's coming along nicely.
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ChronoReaper [2008-01-17 20:36:08 +0000 UTC]
I don't know why you are beating yourself up...the majority of everyone who has seen your work praises you for what you are doing, its the best artwork we have seen in a long time in a Star Fox Comic, better than the 2002 Star Fox Adventures Comic. Maybe not to you but i think its the best.
Keep up the great work hero...your doing good.
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Pyre-Vulpimorph [2008-01-17 19:50:11 +0000 UTC]
Navie, I really don't know why you think your drawing is so crappy. It has been truly awesome from page one!
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A modern US Naval battle cruiser or supercarrier is easily worth in the billions of $USD. If the Great Fox, being a dreadnought-class battleship, is worth 6.75 million Liat, then I suggest and exchange rate of $1000 USD to 1 Liat.
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Krystal's face is scaring me. She must really distrust that cat!
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7THeaven [2008-01-17 18:21:35 +0000 UTC]
I love the style of your comic
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MC847 [2008-01-17 16:49:09 +0000 UTC]
Just One Question....How much Is one Liat compared to one U.S. dollar?
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naviechance In reply to MC847 [2008-01-18 04:35:32 +0000 UTC]
I'd say about equal, at least in terms of what you could buy with it. I'm American, so it's a good basis of comparison for me.
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MC847 In reply to naviechance [2008-01-21 02:26:07 +0000 UTC]
Galley! I dont even think i could afford that... Would the Star Fox team have to use a different mothership for this mission, since the Great Fox is in for repairs?
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naviechance In reply to MC847 [2008-01-21 15:22:36 +0000 UTC]
Well, they still have their Arwings ^^
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