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Newsha-Ghasemi — Red Tulip Bookmark Revised
Published: 2012-01-19 22:47:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 9281; Favourites: 456; Downloads: 28
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got this babeh print ready. heavied up the lines and flipped some things
putting them side by side comps bothered me a bit xDRelated content
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It was my pleasure, dear. Keep drawing and painting. Your work is exquisite.
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I have to say this has been one of the best critiques ive ever gotten. Thank you so much for taking the time, i always love hearing how people see my work. The tulip is actually my favorite flower and always had a hard time expressing why. I found it to be secretive and almost seductive in its silhouette.
I wanted to translate that into this bookmark and im so glad that it it came across the way it did.
I admit i was afraid upping the contrast would take away from the subtle mood. That might be more by an inability to control my reds more than anything xD But youre probably right more pop would have been better!
Again thank you for taking the time to break down the piece, its always helpful seeing my work through fresh eyes.
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This is certainly an improvement upon the original Red Tulip Bookmark! I must say I'm thoroughly impressed with the fact that you have managed to maintain the original concept, but remembering to pull back the drama, so to speak. The drama meaning, in the original picture, her pipe smoke was taking entirely too much of the picture. Now, everything (and I mean EVERYTHING) is set in a more sophisticated manner while still being unique and dramatic, but only to a point. I would also like to take note of the fact that your anatomy skills have greatly improved, and your semi-realistic style has gotten more towards the realistic side.
For example, look at her dress. The folds of the dress are beautifully and believably placed. Even the way the dress itself settles on the woman's body is very neatly and realistically done.
The only thing I can say I'd change about this is that it shouldn't be a bookmark at all, I'd rather see it as some sort of wall scroll or a calendar!
Overall, I would say this is a job well done!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Very seductive and at ease with herself...inviting.
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Ohhh! gorgeous! I'm stunned
I also have a couple of bookmark art =] and I intend to do more, but the style is very different. what material do you get it printed on?
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i actually print them on photopaper and then spray adhere them to cardstock and cut them myself :'D
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im such a boob for saying so late but thank you for the feature!
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No, prob. Great work.
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She reminds me of Madame Red from Kuroshitsuji. I love this second version. It is soooooooooo much better. Way to go!
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thank you! this happens to be both my fav color and flower.
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yesssss theyre mu favoriteee!
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I think this is an incredible improvement from the previous~ it's beautiful! So clean and elegant <3
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Very nice. Liking the colors. Also good job on the improvement.
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Wow! Such an improvement. I like this new one a million times better. Great work!
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thanks so much! i like it better toooo
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GIIIIIIIIIIVVVVVVVVESSSSSSSSSSSSS! xD
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its my favorite flower
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This is pure love <3 I absolutely adore the hair and the dress!
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That is super cool. 8) I really dig that dress too--and the head peice. Ahsajh. Gorgeous. (:
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thank you so much! :*
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This looks beautiful! The composition, colors, and pose are just wonderful. I'm in love with the hair, its so edgy. The style of drawing and coloring is unique, and very pleasing to the eye. Also, you can really see your improvement when you compare this newer revised bookmark to the older one. Great Work! ^^
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thank you so much Lady! they are def fun to redraw.
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Love love love your bookmarks so much!
I want all of them!!!
Seriously though I love this ones pose and that hairstyle is moi classy!
Lovely lovely work dear!
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hahhahahaha *kisses!*
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Improvement much
I love the way you drew the tulips
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hahahah thank you! i actually just used the old tulips, there was no way i was redrawing all those flowers!
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Lol, I get that
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