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galaxy543 [2021-06-15 17:39:35 +0000 UTC]
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galaxy543 [2018-06-15 21:48:06 +0000 UTC]
By the way, what does Liza look like under the mask?
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galaxy543 [2018-06-07 02:00:12 +0000 UTC]
A FROG soldier or Haven Trooper by the name of Liza was finally released from Liquids grasp. Fortunately a Marine by the name of Specialist David, whose Squad had been wiped out, found her in a tunnel going crazy, and being the nice dude he is, he calmed her by giving her a hug. After a while they sat down and cuddled while David called for Evac. "Please heal me" she said as they both cuddled until evac arrives.
Some changes for the summary/story.
Not sure if Squad or "Evac." were supposed to be lowercased or not so I let them be.
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Kommandant-Wolfe [2015-03-21 11:10:23 +0000 UTC]
you should make a fanfiction to continue it
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NickTheElite In reply to Kommandant-Wolfe [2015-03-21 15:13:34 +0000 UTC]
I would but....I moved on from fanfiction to making Gmod Pics
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NickTheElite In reply to galaxy543 [2018-02-05 13:38:27 +0000 UTC]
WHAT, no no.. its just the lone soldier comforting her after the removal of their "slavery" or mind control.
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galaxy543 In reply to NickTheElite [2018-02-07 14:42:00 +0000 UTC]
No no no. I'm not saying they are doing that.
I'm just saying that its was nice they were just hugging each other.
Compared to other Haven Trooper romance fanfics where the couple would make out minitues after they just met. :/
Yours just simply has the two hugging each other, and just a hint that the two will have a relationship.
Sorry for not being clear on that.
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NickTheElite In reply to galaxy543 [2018-02-25 11:20:58 +0000 UTC]
Ah its fine. thats pretty nice to hear actually
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