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NikkiiChi — Bluestar and Oakheart :FA:
Published: 2011-12-17 23:31:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1732; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 284
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I'm very proud of this <3Fan art for Warriors Bluestar's Prophecy. The page number of this scene is 437 so spoiler alert xD
In my mind Oakheart is a tabby so don't comment about his design ok? >_<
I tried to spice up the sky a little bit by adding a little nebula behind the stars <3
Characters belong to Erin Hunter
Art is mine
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Well, I don't know if this sounds unfair, but their eyes need pupils. That is one of the tings that annoys me in art. With no pupils(especially in cat eyes) the only way I can tell which way they are looking is in the tilt of their head. And some artists aren't good at body positions. You are pretty good at body positions, but Bluestar's right fore-leg is very funky. And I think it would look better if Bluestar is closer to Oakheart. They are very much in love, so they should be closer to eachother. The background is very realistic. Overall, good job!
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Thanks for the critique!~ Believe me, I've tried pupils. I can't draw them without it looking super freaky xD I totally messed up on the legs in this. I am very aware of the 'funkiness' xD
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The legs should be a bit more detailed; the structure of the legs are a bit off. I think that the shoulders on the front legs should be a bit larger. The paws should be a bit more stretched out where the paw touches the ground. I love the backgound, especially the sky. The shadows cast from the cats should take on theire shape a little more. I love the emmotion in their eyes, they make the whole picture! The tree also needs more shading. I do think that you should give them muzzle lines to make their faces stand out and not look flat. Overall an amazing picture! Keep drawing!!!
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Thanks for the critique ^^ I really messed up on the legs. I know that they look weird. I have also started using muzzle lines again in my newest pieces x3
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Their legs are a little too lithe, and the shoulders could use a little work. You may want to draw the muzzle lines. A little more shading, or maybe a different effect could have made it look more like night. Also, the rock and tree need a some more shading. Oakheart's left forepaw is a little funky, and his tail should not be sticking straight up. Bluestar's paw should be a little more square where it's bent. The sky looks amazingly realistic. Their eyes are filled with a lot of emotion, as well. Bluestar's hips look as muscly as they should. Oakheart's tabby is very acurate. Overall, amazing job.
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Thanks for the critique ^^ I really did mess up on the legs in this and I amd fully aware of that xD I used to draw muzzle lines but it never looked good so I just put shading there Dx
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my critique: well i think that the leg's could end a little lower but that is all i can see that's wrong
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I messed up on the legs in this pic. I knew I would be flamed with critiques of peopel yelling at me about them
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For this I used MS Paint and Gimp but for my most reasent stuff I have been using Pixlr =3
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I love Pixlr. That's what I use~!
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I love it so much I'm annoying my watchers with practice pictures
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I know you dont have a tablet or stuff but use layers XD Its hard to get used to using them and stuff but yeah XD
I used 8 layers for this pic if you want to check it out [link]
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I can't use layers. I always get told that in critiques and it isn't fair for me because I can't use layers. Trust me, I've tried many times.
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I really like this. Just a thought I think it would look better if oak's mouth was closed. But I really can't complain becuase I don't even draw this well. Great job.
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Well, It had to be open because he is saying something xD But thanks
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^^ welcome. Do you take commissions?
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Ooh. Imma check out your page.
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