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Published: 2013-01-14 03:02:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 106; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Valentine, Valentine, It's all I hear, all I see, I just can't take it.. Wont you just leave me?I hear songs of love, songs of joy, I see the couples and their gifts to their dearests.
How they hold hands, smile, and kiss.
It only sends me more pain to experience.
A pain that changes a way of thinking, A persons way of life, walking down a horrid road.
No one stops them, they are blinded by their own love, to see through the bleeding heart of another soul.
Be the one, and save them, before they tear themselves apart, and change, into unrecognizable form.
For the agony in them is like poison, it spreads, and kills what's left of life.
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As 'SAJ-Man' said, it IS depressing and I guess you put a lot of your own feelings in what you write and I can understand it, because the time you are going through is not that easy and I wish it would change very soon.
I love the way you write. Keep it up and I hope to read a not so depressing thing soon. I hope you will be also able to write happy stuff very soon! You deserve to be happy, because you are too kind to be sad!
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I sometimes try to stop myself from letting my personal feelings drive the things I write, as I want to be able to write things without my need of certain emotions.
Though I understand what you're saying. 
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Yes you should try to stop that. Don't let other people see what you feel when you write. You should be able to write funny things, even if you're sad. That makes a good writer in my opinion, but I do not say with that, that you aren't a good writer. I love how you write, as I've already said, but it would make a perfect writer out of you, if you would be able to do that.
I guess sometimes it's really hard to understand what I mean? Because of my broken English.
You are most welcome and please keep up that amazing work! And I promise, I will look at your new stuff earlier from now on.
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That's exactly what I was thinking, a writer, that can do that, is truly good at what he's capable of. That's who I want to be.
Actually no, not at all, I understand you just fine! And I'll try! I also promise to check out your stuff more often!
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It's depressing, but I like it. It's creative and detailed. I hope you don't feel this way around Valentine's Day.
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Thank you, when I uploaded it, I realized just how depressing it was, but I wanted to give somewhat of a important or interesting message.
Don't worry, I think I'll be fine for the most part. The next deviations won't be so dark.
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I mean I'm single, but I don't get angry or depressed when it's Valentine's Day. And I'm glad you won't be dark. Dark is bad...
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And that's understandable, but I think at least some would, that have been in love before, depending on how the relationship ended. Though I don't wanna speak for everyone.
Dark can be bad sometimes, but In the end, long as it's art, then it's art. Like.. In a good way, or something lol.
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Pfft, yeah, people who are bitter and can't get over stuff.
Dark is... bad... but in a... good way? I guess? I don't know!?!? XDD
Lol, I give up. The world will never know. Just like they'll never know where the President hides the button that launches every nuke in existence in random places. XDDD Wait, that's not funny... @_@'
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