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ode2sokka — Iruka: Keep Breathing

Published: 2007-11-12 01:51:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1411; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 15
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Description Iruka’s hands slid along the floor, leaving crimson trails, as he tried to hold onto something to keep him from reaching out for the man he loved as he walked out the door. The chuunin squeezed his eyes shut, grinding his teeth together to try and keep the agonized sobs inside.

From my story: [link]

The image is much cooler than I can do, but I had to try. Curse you stupid fascination with red-on-white things!

I think I'm getting better with this coloring style. What do you think?

Iruka (c) Kishimoto
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Comments: 12

Oofdar [2007-11-12 10:06:33 +0000 UTC]

I like your use of shadow. The way it transitions into light is very well done--something I want to learn how to do on Photoshop (tell me some time).

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Oofdar In reply to Oofdar [2007-11-12 10:10:22 +0000 UTC]

hey now, and I just noticed both the texture of the hair and the way light reflects off of it. Very well done my friend.

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ode2sokka In reply to Oofdar [2007-11-12 15:32:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It's some fun stuff to do, and I'll be happy to tell you ^^.

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xxLana87xx [2007-11-12 09:36:30 +0000 UTC]

! OMG he's bleeding!!! I gotta read this!

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ode2sokka In reply to xxLana87xx [2007-11-12 15:32:50 +0000 UTC]

Yep. He is.

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xxLana87xx In reply to ode2sokka [2007-11-12 16:26:01 +0000 UTC]

Read the story, poor old Ru!

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ode2sokka In reply to xxLana87xx [2007-11-12 21:01:43 +0000 UTC]

*hugs him* Yes, poor Ruka. I do love to torture him so

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Queash [2007-11-12 02:01:21 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh, this is good. o-o
red on white = nice.
And I do rather like your coloring! ^^
I also rathe rlike Iruka's facial, mhhhm. -nod nod-

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ode2sokka In reply to Queash [2007-11-12 02:04:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

I read a poem once that was about trying to save a dying bird, and the line went something like 'blood on ivory skin' and since then...I can't help. It's an almost morbid fascination on my part .

Thanks! It's a new thing I'm trying, and I'm really starting to like the way it's looking.

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ACINOM18 [2007-11-12 02:01:08 +0000 UTC]

blood.. drama..angst... my kinda story ^^

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ode2sokka In reply to ACINOM18 [2007-11-12 02:04:48 +0000 UTC]

Then I'm probably you're kind of writer

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ACINOM18 In reply to ode2sokka [2007-11-12 02:11:48 +0000 UTC]

yup... i write humor. action. angst.. stuff like that lol

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