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Published: 2014-07-11 15:12:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1162; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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I was just about to go to bed when I realized it was Friday, meaning I needed to update! Totally forgot... sometimes it gets tough remembering to update all my sites. For that reason, I'm rethinking how I do my Japanese site, which has largely been ignored since I got promoted on Inkblazers. Bad webmistress, very naughty!

I made a really silly mistake on one of these pages... I was so embarrassed when I caught it later D:
No, the mistake is not Arma's hair magically growing long again XD That's just MAGIC.

ARMA TO THE RESCUUUUUE.

R.I.P. Blacky. Black cats bring bad luck, but surely it didn't have THAT coming...


BTW,  I just posted p13 from this chapter on Inkblazers today, so if you're just DYING to know what's going to happen, you can subscribe to that site and read ahead It will allow me to buy more apple and rye bread for sandwiches!
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Comments: 38

kessy-athena [2017-05-06 19:01:38 +0000 UTC]

So I guess we now know Arma's family name: Sakaki. 

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OgawaBurukku In reply to kessy-athena [2017-05-07 04:45:31 +0000 UTC]

I was so confused until I saw what page you were commenting on XD Going back and doing a little re-reading, eh? haha

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kessy-athena In reply to OgawaBurukku [2017-05-07 16:12:15 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, yeah, I was surprised that no one else commented on that.  Was that a deliberate Azumanga reference you did?

I figured this is a good point to go back and see what I missed the first time through.  I think I may have found one hint about the identity of the new villain.  ^_^

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OgawaBurukku In reply to kessy-athena [2017-05-10 01:20:23 +0000 UTC]

It wasn't a deliberate Azumanga reference but I did think about it while I was drawing it, so some influence crept in I'm sure, heh.

I have left at least two hints about who the new villain is, one in the first volume and one in the second. I don't think I left more than that, but two were very deliberate "hint hint" moments.

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DarkFireHeart62 [2014-07-13 21:36:46 +0000 UTC]

THE SUSPEEEEENSE

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OgawaBurukku In reply to DarkFireHeart62 [2014-07-16 14:51:51 +0000 UTC]

It kiiiiills meh!! (Actually, I'm totally dying to upload the next pages... must... wait... until... Friday...)

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death-angel-Neirukue [2014-07-12 06:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Awe... Poor kitty...
But YAY Arma in action again! ^^

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OgawaBurukku In reply to death-angel-Neirukue [2014-07-16 14:51:04 +0000 UTC]

Arma to the rescuuue! Defending the city from... from... whatever those things are!

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death-angel-Neirukue In reply to OgawaBurukku [2014-07-16 23:24:35 +0000 UTC]

"ugh how ignorant, we prefer to be called Molish indifference people thank you" ((that... Was supposed to be that them mole things talkin))

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OgawaBurukku In reply to death-angel-Neirukue [2014-07-17 03:06:01 +0000 UTC]

Molish... from Moland? Haha, and yes, I got it, haha XD

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darthmanga [2014-07-12 02:13:43 +0000 UTC]

Yay Arma turns super saiyan 3! She's hairy again!

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OgawaBurukku In reply to darthmanga [2014-07-12 02:45:33 +0000 UTC]

If only she turned blonde as well XD Haha hairy

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darthmanga In reply to OgawaBurukku [2014-07-12 03:48:46 +0000 UTC]

Since she grew wings, I just had the thought "hairy fairy."

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OgawaBurukku In reply to darthmanga [2014-07-12 04:55:47 +0000 UTC]

Pffft XD Now I want to call her a fairy armadillo.
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pink_fai…

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darthmanga In reply to OgawaBurukku [2014-07-12 06:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful, she has the same colors as well. Looks like Arma could be someone originally from the place these Armadillos livev. Too bad they're the smallest kind.

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OgawaBurukku In reply to darthmanga [2014-07-16 15:15:30 +0000 UTC]

There is one other fairy armadillo I think but I haven't found a photo of it.
Ah, it would be neat if I revealed that Arma was South American... there aren't many South American characters in comics/manga, haha. I always thought of her as Middle Eastern for some reason, though... not that I really had an ethnicity in mind for her when I designed her, but yeah.

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darthmanga In reply to OgawaBurukku [2014-07-16 15:27:09 +0000 UTC]

It might make sense for Arma to come from a jungle place like South America, considering where the story first took place in "Nope I'm Outta Here -Istan." Currently it looks like they're in Europe. From what I read so far it looks like not everyone originated from the same place so it can be open to interpretation until otherwise stated.

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OgawaBurukku In reply to darthmanga [2014-07-16 15:53:40 +0000 UTC]

I never specify where they live exactly in the story, but they are definitely supposed to be of different ethnic backgrounds. "Brainless" for example has always been eastern-Asian in my mind, with "Bu-Bu" being Mediterranean... nothing specific, just enough to add a little diversity to the team. A bit down the road I have a few more dark-skinned characters in the story...

Arma does seem like she would fit with a South American background. Maybe I'll go ahead and just say she's South American XD It would certainly reinforce the armadillo image, haha. I think her name is even Spanish (well, originally Latin, but I think "arma" is also the word for "weapon" in Spanish). 

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darthmanga In reply to OgawaBurukku [2014-07-16 16:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like there should be a table of this sometime. I can only remember Arma, Lamia, Vox, and that tiny girl the best.

And according to my translator, Arma is Latin and Spanish for "weapon," or "arm(s)," as in armory type of arms.

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OgawaBurukku In reply to darthmanga [2014-07-16 16:54:57 +0000 UTC]

A table? Like a chart or something? I think the characters are a little hard to remember just because they don't all have their names yet. I keep meaning to make updated bios for everyone, but... I have like no time for that, haha.

Yup! That's where Arma gets her name All the characters have names that have something to do with their abilities.

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darthmanga In reply to OgawaBurukku [2014-07-16 17:16:14 +0000 UTC]

If Arma (weapon) is literally the God of War, I'm not sure where Lamia mess illusion, maybe deceit. Maybe Brainless has something to do with turning people stupid, like zombies or something. Dang, we might have a successor to the Lich King in the making.

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OgawaBurukku In reply to darthmanga [2014-07-16 17:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Lamia's name is synonymous with "witch" in Latin, but in Arabic her name means "brilliance". Plus there is a legend of a queen named Lamia who was beautiful but turned into a snake monster and ate all these men she seduced XD

Brainless, when she gets her real name, does have a name that has to do with her power.

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darthmanga In reply to OgawaBurukku [2014-07-16 17:31:31 +0000 UTC]

I think most who know the name will think of the snake lady. But I guess witches conjure up illusions too. Now we have an idea how to predict their abilities.

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OgawaBurukku In reply to darthmanga [2014-07-16 17:44:11 +0000 UTC]

Well.. they get their names after they get their abilities, haha. But maybe you can try guessing their names knowing their abilities ;D

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darthmanga In reply to OgawaBurukku [2014-07-16 18:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Well that might be a bit more tricky with synonyms floating around. Best I can do at this point is guess the etymology.

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HeartandVoice [2014-07-12 00:25:52 +0000 UTC]

Seems like both hands were bitten. hmmmmmmm.
I try picturing Arma in her uniform with the short hair and...I don't know, i keep seeing a guy in a girls uniform (sorry Arma...)
That poor cat. If you stuck with the homeless man being eaten though, i probably would've screamed "holy sh*t!! That escalated fast!!!!"

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OgawaBurukku In reply to HeartandVoice [2014-07-12 01:38:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that's one reason she has long hair as a Guardian but short in her civilian garb. She keeps cutting it because it gets in the way, but she'll learn that she won't be able to stop her hair from growing out as a Guardian. As a Guardian she looks a little more like a girl this way, which I think helps enforce a little more Girl Powerrrr! attitude, haha. 

Yeah, that's the main reason I cut it. Though there is a gruesome murder in Ch. 9 that will be interesting to draw.

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NPHNTTMYLS [2014-07-11 22:43:20 +0000 UTC]

I feel most rude pointing out a mistake like this, but since you brought it up...
Is it the fact that her right hand is really big in panel three and exuding some form of waves for no apparent reason? :v

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OgawaBurukku In reply to NPHNTTMYLS [2014-07-12 00:18:55 +0000 UTC]

Yup! She got bit on her left hand but I drew her right hand big like it was pulsing in pain... not sure how I made that mistake. By the time I caught it I had already started on tones though. 

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JadineR In reply to OgawaBurukku [2014-07-18 00:34:50 +0000 UTC]

I made that same mistake on one of my pages too XD I had someone pick up something with the right, I think and the next panel she had it on the other hand ;_;

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NPHNTTMYLS In reply to OgawaBurukku [2014-07-12 19:34:47 +0000 UTC]

What??? "Big like it was pulsing in pain"?! Those are contra-revolutionary tendencies! Wary, citizen, or the Brain Police might heed you!  

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MaryBellamy [2014-07-11 15:30:10 +0000 UTC]

Poor cat XD

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OgawaBurukku In reply to MaryBellamy [2014-07-11 15:40:54 +0000 UTC]

I know ;_; (In the original draft I had the mole creature eating a homeless man XD)

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MaryBellamy In reply to OgawaBurukku [2014-07-11 17:01:20 +0000 UTC]

Yikes!

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Raven-Moonflower [2014-07-11 15:15:45 +0000 UTC]

Have no idea what this is, but I like his sword x) Kidding, it's really cool. It's a really nice sword though u.u

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OgawaBurukku In reply to Raven-Moonflower [2014-07-11 15:21:21 +0000 UTC]

Haha this is an ongoing webcomic of mine. Glad you like the sword, but that's actually a girl wielding it! She's meant to be very masculine though, haha. The other girls in this story look more feminine with big boobies and whatever, but they don't get fancy swords so their loss, heh.

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Raven-Moonflower In reply to OgawaBurukku [2014-07-11 16:37:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh ok, sry xP. Yeah, I would rather have cool swords instead

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OgawaBurukku In reply to Raven-Moonflower [2014-07-11 17:34:48 +0000 UTC]

It's no problem ;D It causes confusion within the story as well, haha.
Swords are pretty sweet :3

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