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Published: 2018-09-11 13:16:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 321; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 0
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Description i just felt like posting something sorry
comm for @.raincstar but she's seen it already :0
thanks for 292 watchers ccc":
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Symboli-q [2018-09-11 22:19:10 +0000 UTC]

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;;w;
this
is
so
cute

♥ that. freaking. shading. i would die for it.
♥ the lineart colouring >:3
♥ those ruffles/lines on the jumper (idk they just call me)
♥ mmh floof
♥ right foot (looking at it front on) is so squishhhh
♥ the pose is a really good choice

✖ left foot is a bit flat
✖ pose is a very good pick, but pulled off a bit stiff
✖ the bunny has the stare of a killer, hiding in your closet at night, ready to soak your blood into its stuffing. buts its pink paws are soooo cute. unless that is just pastel blood ?? >:0

overall:
i would definitely take a bullet for this child :>
you've perfectly forced all the soul of cuteness into each pixel

honestly, my cute-o-radar is on 279.8
it only goes up to 10

<33

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oniqiri In reply to Symboli-q [2018-09-11 23:53:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you!! your critiques are always quite helpful how do you do that
the bunny honestly kinda scares me too i feel like i should change the expression but it kinda looked like that on the ref??
🅱️lease don't die for this!! it's not worth dying over!!

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Symboli-q In reply to oniqiri [2018-09-12 02:16:32 +0000 UTC]

umM i write what i see ?? :>
im glad you see the evil glare in the bunny too, otherwise there might be something wrong with me xD

and yes, it is worth dying for *^*

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crystaltoys [2018-09-11 13:33:45 +0000 UTC]

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pfffttt totally not critiquing at 12am in the morning whatever
sssooo
my nitpicking
i think the head is a little too round? the tail could be more fluffy or smth i feel it’s super long?

with this piece, you could define the creases in the jacket with some darker shading
and also on the legs as well, you could shade that as a shadow
the originality!!! it’s a comm pffft w h a t e v e r r r
impact: what the hell am i supposed to type here idk help
you Could play around with the poses alot ig? but there’s me being picky
originality: it’s a comm for god’s sake i’m Not GOING TO BE EVIL LIKE MY ART TEACHER AKSJSKS

ANYWAY I AM JEALOUS! OF! YOUR! SKILL!

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oniqiri In reply to crystaltoys [2018-09-11 13:55:54 +0000 UTC]

go get some sleep bro
i mean yeah i guess i can see those mistakes too :0
i rlly need to learn how to shade better and come up with better poses s s s  sss

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crystaltoys In reply to oniqiri [2018-09-11 14:21:35 +0000 UTC]

pffft it’s just me staying up all night writing fanfic

good to see i’m not just typing up random words and disguising them as a critique ahaha

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Symboli-q [2018-09-11 22:08:36 +0000 UTC]

uwu cutest thing ive seen all day
and i saw a corgi while on the bus, so that's very impressive ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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Symboli-q In reply to Symboli-q [2018-09-12 08:03:35 +0000 UTC]

uwu and that's why it is so amazing, 
that your artwork is cuter than a corgi

 Achievement Unlocked: Kewter than a corgi.

 Status Updated: King of Kewt Korgies   
oops replied to wrong comment

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oniqiri In reply to Symboli-q [2018-09-12 07:54:30 +0000 UTC]

b-but,, corgis are kewter

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Symboli-q In reply to oniqiri [2018-09-12 08:03:44 +0000 UTC]


uwu and that's why it is so amazing, 
that your artwork is cuter than a corgi

 Achievement Unlocked: Kewter than a corgi.

 Status Updated: King of Kewt Korgies   

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oniqiri In reply to Symboli-q [2018-09-12 13:10:58 +0000 UTC]

owo an achievement gotted!!
king of kewt korgies honestly sounds so aesthetically pleasing

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Symboli-q In reply to oniqiri [2018-09-12 23:04:28 +0000 UTC]

 king of kewt korgies   
uwu dreamy
i would bow for he or she who rules the corgies

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oniqiri In reply to Symboli-q [2018-09-13 13:24:53 +0000 UTC]

d-does... that corg have five legs
i changed my dA 'real name' to kween of kewt korgies :3

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Symboli-q In reply to oniqiri [2018-09-13 20:35:53 +0000 UTC]

oooo "kween" is so much better
i wanted to think of a k word for queen <333

and why yes, it does in fact have 5 legs
that just so happens to be "sir daniel the third" your most faithful corgi

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winterpianos [2018-09-11 19:32:51 +0000 UTC]

umm omg this is so cute i cant even
ur super talented wow

i love the fluffy tail and how you outlined the drawing

this is all so cute wow

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oniqiri In reply to winterpianos [2018-09-12 07:55:26 +0000 UTC]

no u :^^^
you just gotta experiment and practice a lot, really! my old pixels are really an eyesore for me rn
thank you so much for all of your support!!! <3

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winterpianos In reply to oniqiri [2018-09-12 19:46:42 +0000 UTC]

aa yw <33333

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Darnarys [2018-09-11 14:02:30 +0000 UTC]

that rabbit face owo

this looks pretty nice! The rabbit ears look a little odd tho, like, they shouldn‘t bend that way? I‘m talking about the right ear oof uwuuuuuu

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oniqiri In reply to Darnarys [2018-09-11 14:14:39 +0000 UTC]

you're....right

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Darnarys In reply to oniqiri [2018-09-11 14:19:34 +0000 UTC]

rEEEEEEEEEE

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RaincStar [2018-09-11 13:24:51 +0000 UTC]

i still love this!! thank you so much!!! your pixel art is so cute :'3
also congrats on 292 watchers<3

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oniqiri In reply to RaincStar [2018-09-11 13:52:30 +0000 UTC]

i'm so glad that u do!!
and thank you so muchh

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