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Published: 2003-07-08 17:29:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1609; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 258
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In-Raged!I was blind so I carved my eyes out with a dull spoon.
Then I adorned my empty soul sockets with red roses.
The warm blood trickles down my sad white doll face and onto
my lovely white dress.
Soiled with semen and tattered by ticks.
I forever question the purity of my sinful innocents. Only once again to be reminded of my own pathetic existence.
And now, slowly my sanity begins to be washed away
by the raging storms that molest the broken hour glass;
for which it rest within my hollow breast never counting time.
For indeed, with one quick turn of the door with no handles
I will open the opened Pandora's box into the chained angel's cage, Lucifer,
and he will rape me of my perverseness
and send me on a realm of continuous orgasm.
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Comments: 48
I think this is a quite disturbing peice. Which i normally would of liked. The first paragraph I think is lovely( I tend to dig out eye sockets in my scetches on a regular bases). But the last line is just..if it weren't for that last line i would totally adore this poem.
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Very creative imagination.....you sent me on a "realm of continuous orgasm"
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what?? like i thought it was a lil sad at the beggining but it totaly went a differnt way but its still good
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Great poem. I'm actually going to print it out so I can read it again later. Also, I believe that I agree with most when I say that it rivals that bitchin' icon of yours (to which I did look up the image, read that whole story on female circumcision and was thoroughly disgusted. Unsarcastic thanks.) You should definitely submit more poetry.
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woah... sick like but I like it.. eerie and disturbing quility,almost erotic disgusted sounding,great job i like it
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I love this poem, it gives me a beautiful vision in my head with the roses wet with blood blending into a white dress.....
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Ok, I just got around to reading this and for some reason I suddenly have the desire to tape a pair of horns on my head and paint myself red. Not sure why that is.
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Wow...
That's all I can really think of to say. There aren't very many words for it.
But I do love the last stanza.
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I'm disturbed and intrigued with the imagery and emotion. *loves*
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great use of words, just WOW wish I could write like that, excellent work!!
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wow...really powerful. great word usage. i love it, i really do. 
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Oh..so it's one of THOSE nights is it?
Remember...Lucifer don't wear no protection...
Thanks for this extra window into your world...I think it looks a little like mine.
Well...sort of.
..and thanks again for all your comments.
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Thanks a lot Kevissimo.
^^ Hehe, does your world have people that understand each other without the need to explain with words? That would be the greatest world. ^^ Or perhaps not when they want to stay hidden, but at the same time are still searching. Hehehe, human beings are so strange. I don't understand them one bit. *pokes the humans*
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I wouldn't want to live in any other...
yeah, these strange creatures....these weird, brilliant, broken, dark, hopeful little vessels of grace and madness. I wonder what they'll do next....
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lord, the entire poem is fucking lovely. +fav
*adores your writing*
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^o^ O you made my day. THank you so so much.
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i like it too! can i like it too, i wonna like it with everyone elts, i wonna i wonna i wonna
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Nice writing.^^
And the illustration would make a nice tattoo^^
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Wow, I didn't know female parts could look so...angry. I beg thee female genetia, I mean you no harm, spare this weak man from your cruel, spiky, blades.
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LMAO!!! Have anyone told you how cool you. Well, you are.
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This is favorite material...you really should write more poetry. I remember this one anime were this guy created this doll and she died because he never loved her..you kind of remind me of that.
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You remind me of the doll. She was very tragic in a sexy sort of way.
yes, write more, one can make a great picture with words as well!
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You really like my writing? Maybe I will write more. However though, you rule at writing.
Wait do I remind you of the doll our the guy?
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I love the urgency and strenght of this poem... wonderful work..
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errmmmm ok.... *ponders*
that was justs ..... pure .... cold .... and sad
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OMG! I love your writing. Its so expressive with depth,and very very good!!!!!! ; _ ;
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love ur writing u should do a piece that goes along with this...that's kind of hard to do, but it would rock. see, it's people like u that i envy for writing. i can't do it :/ i can do it rarely when i do a really cool piece of artwork, but that's extremely rare
heh. this is good stuff, i'd love to read more...
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That is so awsome!
Oh my god, you're so....so BLAH! I can't think of the words....dammit!
you are a god!
I'm not worthy of thee!
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Love this. Would be better without italics.. it makes it harder to read. But good job.. love it.
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