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Published: 2010-04-19 10:53:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2391; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Description Comments from ~ShroudofShadows

Kiwi owes me five bucks XP! She made a bet yesterday that if I got that if I got the page done today, she'd gives me moneys. I like monyes :>. So yeah I did all the coloring. It hurt my brain D:! but it was worth it for my smexy Saix. ILU!!

Comments from ~Kiwi-Bloodstain

Yep, I did bribe her with money. I will admit to that But it got the job done, no? Hehe....we finally see Saix! Looking irritated as always... I drew the first and second panel, Shadow did the last two. Still not completely satisfied with Rhaelixa's art, but this page didn't call for perfection...so yeah. But I'm still learning!


Collab parts;

Kiwi- Drew the first and second panel, worked a bit on the third panel.

Shadow- Drew the third and fourth panel, colored page.

Disclaimer: We do not own Kingdom Hearts, nor do we claim to own it or it's characters. Kingdom Hearts is owned by Disney and Square Enix. If we did, crazy shit would go down. This fancomic, at times, is not supposed to make sense. But, despite any kind of bastard child of an idea we come up with, the dignity and OC of all characters will be retained. So, there will be no hot "Marluxia on Vexen" action or Saix in a tutu. Or yaoi. Period. However, Organization Failure, it's plot, and original characters belong to Ashley Cheeks and Hannah Miller, Jade Shadowblood of Wolf Song and Raeliah of Coyote's Creed, respectively.
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Comments: 9

zhugebeifong [2013-04-26 00:06:49 +0000 UTC]

NICELY done on the up close face on Saix.

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Popcat4587 [2010-08-16 05:04:53 +0000 UTC]

!the gray room tells us nothing! be more descriptive damit! Dx

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Organization-Failure In reply to Popcat4587 [2010-08-16 12:10:31 +0000 UTC]

Kiwi: It will be in the next page, I promise!

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Popcat4587 In reply to Organization-Failure [2010-08-16 18:01:26 +0000 UTC]

LOL I can see them just wondering through the castle going "All the rooms are gray!" xD

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blazendragonmaster [2010-05-13 03:18:52 +0000 UTC]

The main thing that I want to comment on is the hair... shading/inking the detail in as opposed to the digital coloring [look from panels three to four]. Two totally different looks. In all honesty, and I know it took a while, but the lines in Saix's hair seems to take away from his face, sorry . Should've mentioned this earlier when I saw you working on it, but I couldn't place what seemed off about it.

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Organization-Failure In reply to blazendragonmaster [2010-05-13 12:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks for your comment =]

I can agree with you on the hair situation, we're still trying to iron the kinks out of our combined style to make it a bit more...consistent, but I can honestly tell you that this particular paged was pretty rushed, and isn't exactly our best.

I'll be sure to pass your critique onto Shadow, and we'll make adjustments to fix it. Thanks.

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blazendragonmaster In reply to blazendragonmaster [2010-05-13 03:20:16 +0000 UTC]

[sorry edit post above:

Second and third panels, where the hair changes

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The-Hybrid-Mobian [2010-04-19 18:17:34 +0000 UTC]

lol smexy saix is smexy X3

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Organization-Failure In reply to The-Hybrid-Mobian [2010-04-20 00:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it took Shadow forever to do Saix's hair. lol.

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