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Published: 2019-07-27 02:11:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1540; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 0
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Description hold your tongue.

there's a storm coming and
you're sick of it, but the rain-slick pavement's
so beautiful in the light, a
red smear paint-stroke shadow with a soul;
when the lightning bolt falls
you inhale the wreck of sky and stare
at the scent of this dirt rich place
with its downpour name.
tilt your umbrella. breathe.
nothing will stay dry.

this is not how the world
ends. you promise until you believe
in the sunrise tomorrow,
but no matter how you rush the water rushes
faster. the birds flock out and flowers drown
so you slow down, look around.

hold your breath.

you lose the umbrella to the wind.
you burn out and forget to swim.
someone thought the city was beautiful
but you just liked things the color of luck
of rust of roses of dawn and
of blood

there is a ledge.
you can stand but up to your neck; you can look
but not for long.
home has lost its light and the sun has almost set
and at last the walls are cracking.

all things come to an end
and for fear of believing in stars
you stood still and watched it happen.
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Comments: 31

PolarAnemone [2019-10-02 00:16:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm thrilled to see a strong voice for climate change action here on dA. Thank you for spreading awareness - and congratulations on the Daily Deviation.

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PatchworkLynx In reply to PolarAnemone [2019-10-02 15:23:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for the support, may the sun shine kindly on your soul <3

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oviedomedina [2019-09-05 21:01:40 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! I love it!

(And congratulations on the DD, late they might be)

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PatchworkLynx In reply to oviedomedina [2019-09-07 15:07:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! <3

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toxic--sunrise [2019-09-01 03:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!

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PatchworkLynx In reply to toxic--sunrise [2019-09-02 14:46:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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Nimbue [2019-08-27 23:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Very powerful, I love it.

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PatchworkLynx In reply to Nimbue [2019-08-28 20:18:51 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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LindArtz [2019-08-27 22:38:07 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done!!

Congratulations on your much deserved DD!  !


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PatchworkLynx In reply to LindArtz [2019-08-28 20:17:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you!! ^.^

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xlntwtch [2019-08-27 18:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully written, this probes the soul. Thank you, and congratulations on the DD!

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PatchworkLynx In reply to xlntwtch [2019-08-28 20:17:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much, friend! <3

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alapip [2019-08-27 18:12:54 +0000 UTC]

Holy smokes, Rosie K! Judging from this poem
and what you've written on your dA homepage,
you're intelligent, informed, driven, involved,
and ambitious to make a huge difference.

I assume you are no longer 17 and haven't
burned yourself out on that rather colossal
subject load.

All-of-the-above being true, I also assume that
whatever you intend to dedicate your time to
you'll be successful at. And, if you happen to
show up at some later date on a MA election
ballot, and if I'm still around, I'll certainly vote
for you. You sound a bit like a younger version
of Liz Warren. I just turned 80, so please don't
take too long. If politics is not your thing, that
of course, is OK too. 
pip

PS: Congrats on the DD. You sure earned it!

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PatchworkLynx In reply to alapip [2019-08-28 20:16:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you for this kind comment
I am actually still 17, my dA bio is current, and I'm at college, sitting outside a classroom as I type!
It's very encouraging to hear that from you. I admire Warren a lot, and politics is definitely my thing, so I'm hoping to run for office or get into positions of influence over policy somehow as soon as I can. (I'm also super excited to turn 18 in a couple months and be able to vote!!)
Thank you for being so supportive    

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alapip In reply to PatchworkLynx [2019-08-29 00:40:40 +0000 UTC]

Welcome to the political world, Rosie.
Anything you post here, I'll be watching.  

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ariya-sacca [2019-08-27 14:44:12 +0000 UTC]

I still believe in stars

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PatchworkLynx In reply to ariya-sacca [2019-08-28 20:09:09 +0000 UTC]

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BenMoustache [2019-08-13 17:22:45 +0000 UTC]

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PatchworkLynx In reply to BenMoustache [2019-08-14 16:27:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you! <3

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miserabel [2019-07-31 15:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work, I love this piece, I finished reading it with mostly a thirst to re-read, because there's so many things going on, and I'm sure I haven't discovered it all yet...

Also! Also thank you for tackling these difficult subjects. Poetry made political is amazing, I feel

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PatchworkLynx In reply to miserabel [2019-08-02 16:39:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much, you're so kind

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JessaMar [2019-07-29 20:10:19 +0000 UTC]

The visuals in this are amazing.  I am not sure whether the political meaning struck me on the first reading, though.  Of course the subtlety of that is not necessarily a bad thing.

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PatchworkLynx In reply to JessaMar [2019-07-30 15:58:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you <333

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squibblyquill [2019-07-27 19:21:21 +0000 UTC]

Very engaging read.

For me, a thunderstorm gives me the home-feeling. It's the unbroken sun that puts me out of place.

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PatchworkLynx In reply to squibblyquill [2019-07-28 16:58:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you for reading and commenting

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adelechapline [2019-07-27 15:58:23 +0000 UTC]

This is truly beautiful

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PatchworkLynx In reply to adelechapline [2019-07-28 16:57:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you!! <3

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blanketings [2019-07-27 04:51:07 +0000 UTC]

this is absolutely gorgeous-- your writing is as beautiful as ever! <3

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PatchworkLynx In reply to blanketings [2019-07-28 16:56:58 +0000 UTC]

ahhh thank you as always

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echo-bloom [2019-07-27 04:14:32 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I love every line of this. 

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PatchworkLynx In reply to echo-bloom [2019-07-28 16:54:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much <3

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