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Published: 2005-02-08 15:23:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 4369; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 846
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Shine.***
sxc.hu + DyingOrchiD
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edit: Made a few changes from feedback.
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Comments: 51
The colour of the water and the colour of the light are sublime!
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you do some awesome work , really impressive...
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No words⦠This piece is Hype⦠Nice work!
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the sunlight streaming down an the golden tint on the water are amazing i really like this
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Nice one! I really like the colours in this one. Can't even see which parts were manipulated, you obviously did a god job at it
Nice framing too.
-Thomas
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girl is too blurred in comparison to the background.
Where the water meets the rock you've forgotten shadow. (this is probably the sloppiest part, especially the cave on the far right water level).
Technically, that tree should be casting shadow on the girl as well.
Generally inconsistent with the clarity of the pieced together images, notably the girl stock.
needs work.
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"Where the water meets the rock you've forgotten shadow. (this is probably the sloppiest part, especially the cave on the far right water level)."
mr. mladen, the water and the rock is one photo!
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thats strange... really looks quite odd.
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It looks perfectly normal to me.
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i see the cute ladies in there relaxing 
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Nice setup of colors, i like this one very much...
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magical, peaceful, powerful...
gret job you did here...
loved the image!
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great decision to change the color of the dress. excellent work
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This is wonderful, again i didn't notice the girl at first but i liked that. I love the fact she blends into the surroundings so well. The colours are great, i really like it
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wow
I love how all your photos have such an intense glow of colour to them
incredibly eye appealing
at first I didn't notice the lady standing in the mist of those rocks
and then when I saw her I was like wow.
I really feel her expression just lookin at this photo
free
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thanks, i need to do some changes i tihnk to draw more focus to the girl
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actually I like that she is not noticable at first
1 it makes you look carefully
2. it makes her look like she is one with this rock
glowing gold just like her surroundings.. cause the feeling eminates through her
and makes her feel like that...
like shining so beautifully
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third comment, i know, but there's somoething about this piece that strikes me.
firstly, i'll reiterate: i love the colors of the water... it's what makes this piece for me.
the typography and bordering is excellent
as one moves their eyes up, however, the piece becomes rather cluttered.
secondly, the woman. i didn't even notice her until i examined the full view. i assume it was the artists intention to have her sort of blend in, be a PART of the landscape, however i feel it would be more effective to either change the color of her dress so she stands out, of remove her completely, because she is more of a distraction than a focual point. i think she's important to the piece though, so i would suggest either
a) changing the color of her dress, as previously mentioned
b) clearing up the area around her, of shrubbery etc.
c) moving her over to the right side of the piece, so as to draw more attention to her. plus the rocks on that side would provide better contrast.
~aleighm
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thanks mate for the comment, yeh i think someone else mentioned they didnt notice the lady. Perhaps a change of colour might help
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haha no problem
sounds good.
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Wow, excellent lighting. What i love most is the warm orange and red tones throughout this piece.
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yes, lighting is very good indeed,
everything overlaps perfectly,
welldone
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The picture feels so warm and peaceful! I like the girls glowing skin from the suns ray.. very nice
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Love it...THe colors and the lighting are WONDERFUl.....this is a great job...
I'm not sure what shrubbery problem that you are refering to....but yeah great job...
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OOooh! Thats very pretty! it toook me a little while to see that there was a woman standing in the sunlight basking! It looks so happy!
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the lighting is really striking. The entire photo looks great.
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really wonderful ! I love these warm colors
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