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Piddies0709 — Weight Of Your Sins-9TSR

Published: 2015-07-03 18:42:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 2546; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 1
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Description "Let me help you pick up your dead
As the sins of the father are fed"
~Jethro Tull-Thick As A Brick (Oh the irony...)

I'm not going to stop until I'm finish, DAMN IT!!!   For this one, it didn't take me so much time to finish, since there wasn't as much detail. One evening we had a really bad thunder storm and a possible tornado alert. The sky gave off this BEAUTIFUL color of clouds, that I just had to capture on my camera. Which gave me an idea to use these photos for some of these illustrations. So don't be too annoyed if you see these skies come back again in later scenes. Call it a stroke of luck...
I believe this is chapter 4, yes? This is after 9 menages to not only find 8's body still intact (say for a few scorch marks) but also drags pulls this large sack out from the ruined factory. For a little guy with no mussels, he's pretty strong... 8's not the only one thats weighing 9 down. The memories of all that has happened still wavering in his head, is what is driving him to keep going. Symbolically, it is not only 8 he is slinging of his shoulders, but also the weight of the past as well.

(story)~
(9,8)~Shane Acker
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Comments: 17

JozeeBird [2016-03-05 20:41:12 +0000 UTC]

How poetic!

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BlackWolfStar15 [2015-08-19 14:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Your description for this is amazing.

Even after the factory was destroyed, I always feel that 8's body survived the explosion by any chance by either having his body unknowingly dragged into a hole by the Spider Bots, or the explosion sent him into some debris that shielded him from the flames.

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Piddies0709 In reply to BlackWolfStar15 [2015-08-20 02:50:16 +0000 UTC]

Is it because of the Thick As A Brick quote?

I felt that too, as if by pure luck, somehow 8's body would be shielded from the rest of fire. 

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BlackWolfStar15 In reply to Piddies0709 [2015-08-20 04:20:05 +0000 UTC]

I actually meant where you wrote that 9 pulling 8 symbolizes the weight of his past.

Glad we have fanfiction for that.

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Piddies0709 In reply to BlackWolfStar15 [2015-08-22 03:29:48 +0000 UTC]

Ah, yes. Thats how I saw it anyway.

True that.

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ChaoFlakaa [2015-07-30 21:16:47 +0000 UTC]

I dont know why him having to drag 8's body is hilarious. no offense.

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Piddies0709 In reply to ChaoFlakaa [2015-07-31 03:41:36 +0000 UTC]

None taken. I fine it a bit funny as well.

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FaithTheStitch [2015-07-06 21:57:11 +0000 UTC]

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Piddies0709 In reply to FaithTheStitch [2015-07-07 04:14:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Celestial-Rainstorm [2015-07-03 19:07:11 +0000 UTC]

I love the idea of using your gorgeous skies in photos! Its ingenious! (And yes, Chapter 4 :3)

How are you so good at picking out every little theme I tried to incorporate into this thing? (Or did I somehow manage to write it halfway decent?)   Finding the biggest guy and having to get him home himself while falling into the depths of the current darkness he's enveloped in is my attempt to get this thing to go smoothly. XD As always, another magnificent piece! I really love the color palette on this one - very warm and inviting is a great juxtaposition to how 9 feels and the overall mood of the stitchpunks. For some reason, 8 facedown got a chuckle out of me XD I can just imagine his other arm kind of dragging along the ground. (And you draw him so incredibly well!) 

I cannot WAIT to see what you have in store next! The next chapter contains one of my favorite moments. 

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Piddies0709 In reply to Celestial-Rainstorm [2015-07-04 02:59:18 +0000 UTC]

My best answer to that question would be.... I'm not sure.. I guess as I read to story I can just envision whats going on as I'm reading. Thanks again. 8 isn't the easiest for me to draw. Big characters, buff/fat/whatever are always tricky and not always my favorite when it comes to drawing them. I had 8 facing down to avoid showing his eyes mainly, as that is what I'm doing with all of the dead rag-dolls. Keeping their eyes hidden.

As for what I have next, still focuses on chapter four, but the best part of chapter five will be coming.
(It's the break-down scene isn't it?)

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Celestial-Rainstorm In reply to Piddies0709 [2015-07-05 04:08:00 +0000 UTC]

8 is the most difficult for me to get right, too (right behind our beloved 2). Its their darn faces that always throw me off, haha. But I noticed you were doing that, keeping all their eyes hidden from view. I thought that was incredibly clever - really showing how lifeless they are and how lonely the remaining four are. So I'm guessing when they actually come back to life, its going to be a wonderful reveal? Oh man, I cannot wait to see what you have planned in that ingenious mind of yours! 

And yes, I will admit XD and its because that is one of the chapters that was the most difficult to write. All of the previous drafts I had made 9 too....well, emo, for lack of a better term. He as being far to melodramatic and wanting to die and wanting attention and yadda yadda yadda, so to finally get it right sets this chapter as one of my favorites, especially that scene. I can't wait to see how you depict it! 

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Piddies0709 In reply to Celestial-Rainstorm [2015-07-05 17:33:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh... 2 is a mess. I swear to scientist who made him was either really experimenting on design or he just didn't have a whole lot of material with him at the time and just made what, he had. Either way I always have to look up reference whenever I'm drawing him, which there isn't enough of, so then I have to look up fan-art of him....And when I do... Let's just say there are somethings in this world better left unseen....   

I think your end result for that one was well done. He didn't come off as emo to me. The pain he was feeling was understandable since he did lose most of his group and feeling the guilt for that. Plus a lot of that was on his first day. What an awful way to start out on life. Poor little guy...

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Celestial-Rainstorm In reply to Piddies0709 [2015-07-06 01:32:46 +0000 UTC]

LOL Poor fellow is indeed a mess. But he does have such a badass bowtie. In all honesty I really love his design - he does indeed look like a resilient little old man who won't let physical handicaps stop him, but god damn he is so hard to draw. Its probably his lack of a chin that makes it so difficult. And about that fanart part, it is hard indeed to find ones that aren't putting him in....certain lights (I just screencap him from my digital copy of the film....which may or may not be legal...  .) 

Awe, thank you. It was super hard to get 9 in-character for this scene, and to see it in drawn form is going to be such a privilege. It is a huge privilege to have someone illustrate a story of mine - and a fantastic artist to boot!   

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Piddies0709 In reply to Celestial-Rainstorm [2015-07-06 03:52:10 +0000 UTC]

I don't find anything wrong with his designs, it's just tricky to get right. His head kinda reminds me of a turtle's for some season. 

Sure thing. At least you are staying true to character unlike SOME other fan-fic writers out there. Which is what I like about your story the most. I still have 1, 5, and the cliff scene with 6 to go, but I did finish the sketch drawing for it.

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Celestial-Rainstorm In reply to Piddies0709 [2015-07-07 00:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh my lord, it DOES! That just makes him, like, ten times cuter. 

And yes, that always annoys me - when characters are thrown horrifically out of context. I know fanfiction gives you creative freedom and you're the writer, but there's still a level of respect that should be taken when writing about someone else's creation. What do I know though. (And you're doing everyone? That's so cool!) And you're doing the ENTIRE story? Whoa...that's quite a feat! And something I could never be able to thank you for - the ones you've already done have floored me. 

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Piddies0709 In reply to Celestial-Rainstorm [2015-07-09 16:23:05 +0000 UTC]

I feel if your gonna do a fan-fic, you at least have to know who the characters are and how to right them. You can still add new things about them, they just need to fit. A lot of fans just don't do that. Which can get very irritating, especially when they have a poorly written OC thrown in there.. But I think you did well with this, and I'm happy to be doing the images for them. Heads up the next one is on it's way.

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Celestial-Rainstorm In reply to Piddies0709 [2015-07-10 02:29:38 +0000 UTC]

My thoughts exactly. And I cannot wait to see what you have in store next. There are some scenes I am so excited to see, I can barely hide my excitement. SO MUCH EXCITEMENT   

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