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Published: 2011-12-25 04:54:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1243; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Description Colored doodle.

An OC, but I haven't even worked out her name yet...

To : Could you please correct the anatomy? Thank you!
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Comments: 24

katara121 [2012-01-31 07:15:45 +0000 UTC]

She looks really awesome

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Pimic In reply to katara121 [2012-01-31 20:55:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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katara121 In reply to Pimic [2012-02-01 06:07:43 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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13raincell [2012-01-31 01:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Her wrist looks a bit floppy, and her forearm looks a bit too long. The forearm from wrist to elbow should be the length of the face from chin to crown.
Additionally, pull her chin back a bit if she doesn't have an underbite.

I love the shading and that you pulled greens into her shirt.

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Pimic In reply to 13raincell [2012-01-31 01:55:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the critique! Do you have any suggestions for making the wrist less floppy?

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13raincell In reply to Pimic [2012-02-01 00:48:57 +0000 UTC]

Look at how the arm is shaped. When I draw arms, I actually do a rough sketch of the placement of the bones. Generally, there is a more defined structure to the wrist, with a SLIGHTLY concave curve where the joint is.

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Pimic In reply to 13raincell [2012-02-01 00:50:17 +0000 UTC]

I'll try that next time

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albaoaurora [2012-01-30 23:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Good luck with a name! It's hard to name characters. I really like her clothes, they're amazing. Good job on it overall, I like it. <3 Pointy boobs though.

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Pimic In reply to albaoaurora [2012-01-31 01:19:33 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks

Wow, they DO look pointy! I think that was meant to be a (badly drawn) clothing fold.

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albaoaurora In reply to Pimic [2012-01-31 03:56:33 +0000 UTC]

I like the fold!

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Pryate [2012-01-06 23:31:37 +0000 UTC]

Very good drawing. I love the lines and the shades, the way you drew the eyes.

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Pimic In reply to Pryate [2012-01-06 23:40:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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fallenXisolation [2012-01-06 04:17:17 +0000 UTC]

I really love your shading on this

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Pimic In reply to fallenXisolation [2012-01-06 21:11:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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hazza01 [2012-01-05 05:21:39 +0000 UTC]

great work on this <3

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Pimic In reply to hazza01 [2012-01-05 21:49:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Violetphantasy [2012-01-05 03:29:02 +0000 UTC]

Incredible job with the hands, especially; those are extremely hard. Her hand does seem a bit long to me, though. Otherwise, it's quite lovely. I really like the movement of the hair and the shading.

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Pimic In reply to Violetphantasy [2012-01-05 03:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And as for the hand being long: Yes, doesn't surprise me xD I redrew that hand about 50 times, it was such a pain in the butt.

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kiyoshi-seishin [2011-12-27 21:04:35 +0000 UTC]

aw she looks cute ^^ i love her shirt. i don't know if you are into japanese names but um her name could be Kumi it means rarely seen beauty ^^ just a small suggesting :')

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Pimic In reply to kiyoshi-seishin [2011-12-27 21:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

Kumi sounds really pretty--thanks for the suggestion ^^

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kiyoshi-seishin In reply to Pimic [2011-12-27 21:12:04 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ^^ i think so too :'D

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namidachiyukiuchiha [2011-12-26 17:51:27 +0000 UTC]

o-0 so pretty her name should be as pretty as her seriously love her hands im totally crap at hands

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Pimic In reply to namidachiyukiuchiha [2011-12-26 17:54:00 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you! (I am also utterly craptastic at drawing hands ^^)

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namidachiyukiuchiha In reply to Pimic [2011-12-26 17:58:42 +0000 UTC]

really they look awesome?!

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