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xlntwtch [2018-07-09 07:44:25 +0000 UTC]
I like all of this. It builds well, it holds the tension (though I don't know what "Slende.." means, hmm) and ends on a cliffhanger.
It's almost humorous, but not. Humming - what DOES the scene remind the walker of? Just curious - see what you did.... [!]
PS. Love the Coleridge quote and that it happened to you. And, I think you're right that much continuation might ruin it. Still curious.
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PivotShadow In reply to xlntwtch [2018-07-09 15:59:38 +0000 UTC]
True, I could have explained that better--it's a reference to a horror video game, Slender, that was pretty big a few years ago: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Slender:…
Basically, you have to collect a bunch of pages while wandering around in a dark wood and trying not to die. It's not thaat good a game, but very atmospheric, and I guess it somewhat inspired this story.
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xlntwtch In reply to PivotShadow [2018-07-09 19:18:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I learn a lot on dA.
I like it better that this happened to you, though it's interesting to think a game did, too. (:
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PivotShadow In reply to aPelican [2012-11-24 00:08:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Feedback is always appreciated!
Yes, it's kind of a curse AND a gift to have an overactive imagination. If you don't scare easily, that is...
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