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pixxy-dust-fades — cease to hold meaning
Published: 2008-08-19 16:09:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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This beauty was felt in my mind.your heart,it felt so divine.
then it was released,
this love was made to cease.
Dreams so regrettably conjured
led sense to be murdered, thrown from here.
Dreams now morphed into nightmares.
a crime that shan't remain uncovered.
This was fated never to exist.
To challenge fate; a heart can not resist.
an err that shan't be comitted twice.
The consolation that it ended before it commenced, shall suffice.
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hmm....i don't know. i might be bitter if i thought that way about love that ends....
well, i conceed that i HAVE excused some love as such before, and i WAS bitter.
i can sort of hear a tone that sounds like tragic sarcasm. like you're trying to convince yoursef to believe something you know isn't true, in the hopes that it might be.
i dunno..that's my thought.
very well written though...melancholy in the least
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well you are very close..this is not exactly about me. But that is what i tried to convey.
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yeah...wasn't really subjective..but..good good
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awww thankiesss
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no problem sweetheart!
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Great poem. Once again I really like the last line.
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