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I kinda massively overhauled Les Girls recently - what I've decided to do is re-upload the new version, but in blocks of a few scenes at a time for ease of editing and proofreading as a lot of stupid mistakes went unnoticed the first time around.

Here's the general informational shit - characters and whatnot. The biggest changes are definitely the layout (I changed the split of the acts for one thing) alongside some edits to the soundtracks, and the addition of Fabrizia as a bigger character (the MC/compere) and Marcie (the sassy barmaid) as a recurring role. A few plot details were altered, primarily Darla's death and the intricacies of Farrah's story. Plus I think it's just more polished, slightly funnier, and generally better done this time around.

I also changed Holly and Fabrizia's names - Fab was originally Fabrizia Force-It-In, but I thought that was too similar to Farrah Foce-it-In, who is a character in Priscilla, and god knows this script needs more Priscilla parallels like it needs a hole in the head. 'Holly Caust' was just deemed too insensitive so she's now Mary Jane Holland, but still goes by Holly.

Do enjoy as I start posting, kittens

Description
I kinda massively overhauled Les Girls recently - what I've decided to do is re-upload the new version, but in blocks of a few scenes at a time for ease of editing and proofreading as a lot of stupid mistakes went unnoticed the first time around.

Here's the general informational shit - characters and whatnot. The biggest changes are definitely the layout (I changed the split of the acts for one thing) alongside some edits to the soundtracks, and the addition of Fabrizia as a bigger character (the MC/compere) and Marcie (the sassy barmaid) as a recurring role. A few plot details were altered, primarily Darla's death and the intricacies of Farrah's story. Plus I think it's just more polished, slightly funnier, and generally better done this time around.

I also changed Holly and Fabrizia's names - Fab was originally Fabrizia Force-It-In, but I thought that was too similar to Farrah Foce-it-In, who is a character in Priscilla, and god knows this script needs more Priscilla parallels like it needs a hole in the head. 'Holly Caust' was just deemed too insensitive so she's now Mary Jane Holland, but still goes by Holly.

Do enjoy as I start posting, kittens