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purple-whirlpool — Love Divine

Published: 2009-11-09 15:22:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 767; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Description The love of God surpasses all understanding.

Anyone who plagerises my work will be accountable to the God of this universe. If found guilty, will be thrown into the eternal fires of hell. So think twice before you do!
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ScurvySimon [2009-12-30 22:51:15 +0000 UTC]

Lovely poem! You did a great job with the rhythm and rhyming here - rhymes can often appear forced or tacky in a serious poem, but in this they flow wonderfully, and really capture the message of the poem.

The background image fits in very nicely, too!

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purple-whirlpool In reply to ScurvySimon [2009-12-31 15:24:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for such wonderful edifying comments. This poem got integrated into a new one [link] because after writing it I wrote another one with much the same subject and the same rythm so I spliced the two together and added more to the end.

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christianconnection [2009-12-20 02:41:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this is a very wonderful writing. I just... well, I just love it.

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purple-whirlpool In reply to christianconnection [2009-12-21 15:52:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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AnaMariaMaxim [2009-12-15 17:29:20 +0000 UTC]

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purple-whirlpool In reply to AnaMariaMaxim [2009-12-16 10:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Glad you like it
Thanks for the too.

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Dacha-thwei [2009-12-15 05:51:37 +0000 UTC]

This text is very beautiful! It touched me so much that I cried - the words you've written down is certainly blessed by the Holy spirit of God. *favs*

"Lord, my soul cries out in pain
Your Spirit's the life-blood in my veins,
When you lift my spirit feels slain
I cry to you, don't go!"

This was the part that made me cry - keep up with the great work and God bless!

~Dacha-thwei

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purple-whirlpool In reply to Dacha-thwei [2009-12-15 12:24:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Although I asked them not to put this one up after I sent it because it's been rewritten and posted as this [link] Thanks anyway

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Dacha-thwei In reply to purple-whirlpool [2009-12-19 11:46:47 +0000 UTC]

Yer most welcome!

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164-eXist [2009-12-15 05:46:44 +0000 UTC]

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purple-whirlpool In reply to 164-eXist [2009-12-15 12:24:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Although I asked them not to put this one up after I sent it because it's been rewritten and posted as this [link] Thanks anyway

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164-eXist In reply to purple-whirlpool [2009-12-15 20:31:19 +0000 UTC]

It's okay

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BlaineKatsura [2009-12-15 03:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Amen.

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purple-whirlpool In reply to BlaineKatsura [2009-12-15 12:23:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Although I asked them not to put this one up after I sent it because it's been rewritten and posted as this [link] Thanks anyway

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BlaineKatsura In reply to purple-whirlpool [2009-12-16 03:41:10 +0000 UTC]

Sure thing.

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BOBSZY [2009-12-14 23:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Great job!

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purple-whirlpool In reply to BOBSZY [2009-12-15 12:23:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Although I asked them not to put this one up after I sent it because it's been rewritten and posted as this [link] Thanks anyway

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BOBSZY In reply to purple-whirlpool [2009-12-15 15:17:16 +0000 UTC]

Np.

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MrsPasswordEnna [2009-11-09 21:40:37 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful^^ I liked so much!

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purple-whirlpool In reply to MrsPasswordEnna [2009-11-11 11:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, thanks for the too

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