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Another pageee!~
I tried really hard on this one to make it look much better than the other pages.
IT KINDA DOESN'T MATCH...
...but It looks nice. C:
~Frightling Really helped me out with this one so I owe a lot to her~ (like wording and anatomy and panel arrangement and such)
I also quite liked drawing Rita in this page, she turned out pretty awesome. Despite having the same facial expression in two of the panels. Ooooohwell.
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well at least we know he didnt kill her and theres a chance shes still alive!
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The posing is so good in the first and last panel!
However... the second panel I'm not too sure on... the anatomy of the fighting cats is a bit wonky although not horrible, and Clover's head is WAY too big, even when considering the style. Dat hair fluff. XD
Still, good job, your getting better at enhancing the drama!
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I spent like, 1 hour and thirty minutes on the lineart for the fighting cats in the second panel.
I was so done, I decided to move on, even though I knew there was /so much/ more that could be fixed xDDDD;
and the proportions look kind of off because they're supposed to look pretty skinny, considering how hard food is to get in the area they live.
Anyhow, I'm glad you like it! ;O; <3
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Don't sweat it, anatomy is really, really difficult to get right in action scenes. The sense of motion is more important and you clearly nailed it here.
And if the cats are malnourished, you could try to show some of the rib cage and maybe some mangy fur.
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Thank you! ;O;
*pokes Benjax* I attempted, but I think its too minor to see.
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NP.
And ya I see it now... cats are such beautiful animals, you really have to go out of your way to make them seem mangy and nasty.
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Completely agreed.
iwuvourfelinecompanionssomuch ;O; <3
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The little white one in the back must be protected at all costs. And perhaps chibified? ;DDD
(It's so cute.)
Fuzzy flashback bubbles look cool, the whole page is well done. (or should I say medium well (STEAAAAAK))
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d'awww <3
thanks so much!
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The shading is what really helped ;3 the angle of it was SO HARD THOUGH.
I have to thank Fright for helpin' me with the idea.
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Pffff, maybe I should ask Fright for help too. >~<
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WOOT! New page! 8D
Rita is so badass. ;w; Baby Clover looks adorable in the first panel too! <3 Another amazing page, Purrl!
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D'awwww thankyou ;O; <3
I kinda tried (but failed) to make them look younger in here, so the first pannel is supposed to be younger, the second is more like mid-teenage years, and the last one is sort of like late-teen young adult looking, closer to the actual time period of the comic as of now.
The flashback will be over in just one more page~ and then after that we only have veeeery few more until the next chapter!! 8D I'm really looking forward to it myself, just because I love some of the new characters that will be introduced, and I'll get to make refs for all these guys currently featured in the comic! C8
I'm really glad you like ittttt ;o; I WORKED ON IT FOR A WHOLE YEAR. (as in, started in 2011 around 9pm, finished in 2012 at like 1am.) A WHOLE YEAR.
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I don't think you failed! It looks pretty obvious that the first panel is of them being younger, whatwith the adorable eyes and proportions! <3
Woo! Huzzah for almost completion~ And refs! Which reminds me, I'd better go make some refs now because I have a bad habit of changing character designs. ;w;
CONGRATULATIONS! 8D I SLEPT FOR A WHOLE YEAR!
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Just wait 'till the next page! ;D I'm not giving out spoilersss...
Eventhoughifyouwerepayingattentionyoumightalreadyknow
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I read it and I'm like, so, she ran away, or what? XD
I really like the plot in this. its amazing, mysteries, something I love!
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