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Published: 2005-10-02 07:37:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 169; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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i don't think it's my best writing, but i think it's cute, and goes with the picturelittle spider on the wall
watching all the world pass by
what makes you think that you won’t fall
why makes you stay to catch a fly?
If I had to stay in one room
For all of my eternity
Where I was born; there make my tomb
I’d die of boredom with certainty
I hope you catch the fly you need
I hope the old lady doesn’t swallow you
I hope to bless you with speed
So you don’t end up under my shoe
God bless the spider and it’s fly,
With more mosquitoes, I’d surely die.
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Comments: 46
thats cool jessa....but i'm not a spider person lol...remember when that huge spider landed on ti's back at sam sam's hahaha that was funny, yet very freaky...glad it wasn't me lol
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hahaha yea that was scary!! that thing was HUGE!!
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theres that spider again...
did i ever tell you about my spider story?
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nooo.. but i'm excited! tell away
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well it takes place when i was 7. I was walking down town with family and out of no where this meteor crashes down onto the earth! i was like OMG! so i when everyone was trying to figure out what was going on or even happening i had a feeling that something was arye...
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So i continued my walk to the crash site of the metoer and there were crowds of people gathering around to see the phenomina. its not everyday something like this happens right? So groves of people were walking towards the smoldering debris. when sudenly, metalic arms come out of the ground from within the meteor! i was far enough away to see it was deffinitly an aracnid type creature. 5 of the eight legs manged to find their way to the ground and people as well. the groves of people suddenly got scared and started to run. i knew i had to do something...
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ahh i'm shuddering with suspense!! go on, please go on!!
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if you insist...
The creature crawled out of the ground and shortly after a state of emergency was delcared. The millitary was called into action. Jets and tanks were luanched almost immidiatly. I knew it was close to futile. Fighters would drop bombs on the metalic creature but it wouldnt even slow the beast down. I knew there was only one thing to do...
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at first i had an idea. with out its legs it couldnt move so i found a tow truch with a mechanical wench. through the chaotic panic everyone was running as far away as they could. i saw the path of the two story spider and started driving towards it! at first i was thinking, "im only seven! what the hell am i going to do against the spider?" that didnt stop me though. i kept going and almost got to him...
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"almost got to him" .. Oh my gawd what happened??? were you ok??
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well the road was littered with tanks that had been destroyed and the whole time im trying to think of how that was even possible! so i drove faster and faster and not know i was already in danger. Before soon i saw a tank making its way ahead of me and though that maybe the millitary was going to make it after all... how wrong i was. my eyes grew full in disbelief as i saw minature metalic spiders rush the tank! they burrowed themselves into the tank and suddenly the exploded. I was obviously in over my head. I came to a complete stop and was ready to turn around. i looked in my rear-view mirror and apparently i was being followed by eight suicidale bomber spiders!
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ahhh run!!!!!!!!
on another note, you should really copy down this story and submit it into your journal or something for your watchers 
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i didnt even think about continueing driving becuase they would obviously take me out before i even had a chance! So i stepped out of the vehicle and ran to the nearest store. I couldnt believe that this attack came so fast or that this was even hapening! When i got to the store door i tried to open it but it was wedged shut. and the spiders were getting closer. I saw what was left of a marine gaurd who was probably part of a troop movment of some kind. I took his side arm and shot the glass that was on the door. Shortly after i saw the tow truck explode and 3 spiders left! i was hoping that they wouldnt find me in the store. but they had heard the gun shot and were on there way towards me! I started to shoot them with what was left in the gun but i only destroyed two! the third was wasnt slowing down either...
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ahhhh there's still going to be one that's gonna get you!!
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I thought so too... and believe me i was near frozen. I through the gun down and started to run to find some cover or something i could get into that he couldnt. I looked down the aisle and i thought it was kinda funny how there was RAID and other random pestisides. Towards the back of the store there was a stair case! I ran up the stairs and closed a heavy metal door behind me. After i locked the door i tried to put something against it. I hear clanks and metal grinding on metal. i was doomed and didnt know what to do...
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Too late for that! i was already in the room and i heard a drill fire up and the door started to make scratching noises. i knew that spider was on its way in and i was pretty close to being doomed. I saw this window and figured it would be better to take my chances with gravity rather then the spider of doom. so i opened it up and started to look around. too my extreme luck there was this rope that was teathered to the roof! i yanked hard on it and it was very sturdy. i grabed the rope and walked backwards a little bit to get a good running jump. Sudenely the door gave away and in came the spider! i started to run and jumped out the window...
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ahhhhhhh bad place to stop!!!!
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The metalic critter charged me and i jumped out the window. The machine followed my every step like it knew where i was going to step until i reached the outside. He kept going straight as the rope pulled me of to the side of the building. i watch as his body smacked the pavement and bounced only to explode in mid air. I was amazed i was still alive! but that could wait... after all... i had bigger bugs to fry.
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does it go on?? i'm excited are there more spiders to explode??
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fortuneatly i didnt run into anymore spiders except for the big mother spider walking around town. but that didnt happen till later. i was still hanging from the rope amazed that i managed to escape impending doom. i climbed to the top of the building were the rope was teathered to something. after i got over the ledge there was another troop of marines that had been wiped out buy the giant bug. It was getting dark so i knew i had to act fast. I went through there gear and took another hand gun, night vision goggles, an assualt rifle and two hand grenades. One of the marines looks kinda cool and co-vert opts-ish. He had this nifty grapling hook gun just like batman! So i took that too. Anyways I drank some water and started to jump from roof top to roof top trying to avoid the evil walking suicide spiders. About two hours later i I was almost directly in the path of the over sized monster spider. It seemed the army was succesful in making him change direction. Using my night vission goggles i saw missles and bullets flying all over the place about 5 blocks away from me, and they were only getting closer...
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the creature was talking down the street recking ever building that got in his way. the tanks were not even putting dents in his armor. The ground started shaking more and more with every step he took torwards me and i was starting to freak at just how big this spider really was. He kept getting closer and closer and i was ready to take all 100 tons of him down. i shot my grapple gun and it connected to his armor. it started to real me in and i was on my way to kick some spider ass. while hanging in mid air i could see the tanks that were chasing it and the spiders that were chasing the tanks. it was quite tragic and i knew that i was the last best hope for man kind.
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I saved the entire world!
Anyways i made my way to the top of the spider. The surfaces was slick and nothing was scratching the armor. At the very top was a hatch type entrance that was really really small. i took my grenades and set them all to explode. i used my grapling hook to replel down a bit so i wouldnt get hit by shrapnell. BOOM! the nades went off and i fell down from the violent shake. i lost my rifle and all my hand gun ammo! i thought i was going to die for sure. but i made my way back to the top and i had made an opening to the inside of the spider! I crawled into the beast and realized that these alein creatures are not the size of you or me. there hallways were almost the size of one of our air ducts. So i made my way to the front of the machine with my night vission on and hope that i would come back alive.
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Well i was in the bug for hours trying to find my way through. Every turn was crapmed and my nightvission goggles were starting to lose battery power. i knew i was lost but thats not really a new for me. So i in sheer fustration i stopped and something weird happened. a small door opened and i saw into the cockpit of the giant walking spider! This was were i was supposed to be... Looking back at me was a creature puzzled and ready too attack.
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the creature looked me dead and the eyes and i looked back. sudenly i noticed it was him who was controling the entire monster! i started to smile and the eight legged creature started to tremble in fear. i took the butt of my hand gun and smashed him like a little bug. the giant spiders stopped moving and i had known that i killed the pilot of the rampaging machine. I started to make my way back from where i came from and heard less tank activity and explosions. I was somewhat lost but it didnt matter all i was in no hurry. i knew i saved the day.
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:clapping: YAY!!! awesome story!! *standing ovation* ENCORE!!
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you should add it in your gallery as a deviation!! hahaha i'm sure someone other than me would enjoy it as much as i did!
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i want to submit a poem i wrote forever ago about aries fire but i cant becuase its kinda sentimental and she will pick up on it fast.
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naw s'okay, maybe she won't notice 
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i brought my book so i'll note it to you later. i have alot of poems that i havnt submitted and probably never will.
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mm cool i'd love to hear/read it
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i posted it. its called the pain that burns.
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so u mean you do like it? or you don't..? i'm gonna guess you do like it 
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